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Feedback on wireframe for landing page
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Iain Cambridge
https://imgur.com/a/APObAiS
Hi there, I'm a copywriter and thought I'd provide a bit of feedback! Here you go! https://www.loom.com/share/36843c7e95e14899972b04efeab7cc53
Thanks the stuff about the font size was super interesting to find out and makes so much sense! And the writing in the them voice makes so much sense as well. Thansk!
Hi Iain, I have gathered feedback on your wireframe here, including alternative for your headline and sub-headline: https://screenbud.com/shot/e429f3d0-433b-46a8-b183-7a8b697de17a
P.S. If you have time, I would love to hear what you think about my feedback and about ScreenBud.
Quick feedback on ScreenBud. I found it hard to figure out what comment related to which selected area. If you could make that more clear it would be really good.
So a quick background of what this project is.
It's for a library like https://spark.laravel.com but for Symfony and much better support via SLA's for bug fixes, doc improvements, and performance fixes.
I figured it would be a good idea to get feedback at this stage instead of waiting for the design to be created.
I'm thinking of having two versions available. Bootstrapper edition that is cheap enough for a solo dev to buy it that comes with bare minimum support and missing a few features like A/B Testing. And then the full version. So I was thinking it would probably be a good idea to have that somewhere on the main landing page as well.