Is my landing page and positioning clear?
Because I actually address 3 target groups (makers, consumers, curators) I have some difficulty in finding the right texts.
I would like to hear if the product I want to offer is clear or if you see room for improvement.
The entire top is for curators, I don't think the others would commonly keep reading
Also marketing this you'd probably only be talking to one group at a times
So no issue with seperating to 2-3 pages
You can make a master one if you really like to
But I think you should start focusing on one, probably the curators if you can back fill yourself
You should also make it shorter and more exciting
Thank you. Any tips/examples on making it more exciting?
Use emotional language and/or action verbs
Maybe in your case it's removing or replacing one
Make or curator? How about you choose? Curator is more exciting than make as it's more specific
Or reverse it starting with monotize you niche knowledge by curating
I made some improvements. Let me know how you like it now! :-)
Cut this text out and it would be even better
Done!
You need to segment your audience - if you think you're after 3 groups, make your landing page talk to them differently!
I agree. I just changed the homepage and now there's only one group. What do you think of it?