Looking for feedback on first MVP landing page
Hi All,
I've been enjoying following the different threads over the past couple of months. This is my first official post. I'm creating my first landing page to gauge interest on a product before I move forward with any production (I have created prototypes to prove the concept). Any insight or feedback on the page/product would be greatly appreciated: https://grip-mask.webflow.io/.
One thing to note, I currently have a FPO section to serve as a placeholder for a video I'll be working on shortly to show the product in action.
Also, I was planning on doing some digital ads to drive people to the landing page, but let me know if you have any creative ideas or tactics to promote it to a wider audience.
Thanks in advance for any feedback/help!
This isn't a problem space I'm familiar with - but assuming it is a valid problem, your landing page does an awesome job of communicating the pain and the remedy. So well done!
The top section was slow to load, so I ended up scrolling too soon (have a look into caching or reducing image sizes).
The about section comes across as a bit of a "wall of text" - people don't want your life story, just to know that you're credible :)
Thank you very much! And I appreciate the feedback on the image loading slow—I will look into updating that to load quicker. And I went back and forth on the about section. I wanted to try to let people in on how I came up with it, and to let them know I'm a normal person who had a problem and was trying to solve it. Not sure if it establishes credibility necessarily, but I was hoping to establish somewhat of a connection.
It's not a bad LP
In this image, the zoomed one, IDK what I should see, but I see something white like the fabric is damaged
https://uploads-ssl.webflow.com/60105f42ba57501b4e4083cc/602d6457504b47206b8be832_Silicone Exploded View_1.png
I accidentally deleted my previous comment! Thank you for the feedback. The white you're seeing is due to my below average photoshop skills. It's a mock up created with a template, so it's not actual product photography and I don't know how I'd fix it to be honest.
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Looks good! It seems to me that a product like would be a great candidate for kickstarter. You can raise some money for production and get market interest at the same time.
ALl the best!
I really appreciate the response! The Kickstarter idea is great—definitely didn't cross my mind. Have you ever done a project on there before?