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Looking for some Landing Page feedback before our Product Hunt launch next week 😳

We're set to release on Product Hunt next week which is all very exciting. We're also planning another Indie Hackers Indie Intros video give away so keep your eyes peeled.

In the meantime we are looking for some feedback on our current Landing Page.

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We also now have Twitter for people to keep up to date with our latest video content.

on October 17, 2022
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    I like the clean simple design & the message is quite clear. It just left me with one question - how?

    I scrolled down to the how it works section and then i see you're a service provider (from above the fold it's not clear if it's an app or service or other).

    I might suggest - something to test - would be to change the button text to 'Find Out How' and then jump to the HIW section (maybe).

    On the copy specifically, you have...

    "We help sell your product through informative explainer videos.
    Whether you want more user sign ups, build brand awareness or educate your audience – we create videos that help you do it"

    I would just suggest some very minor changes (unless you want to add in the 'how') to simplify...

    "We help sell your product with explainer videos.
    Whether it's more sign ups, brand awareness or just to educate your audience – we create videos to help you do that"

    I removed 'informative' as i'm not sure it's needed if you have 'explainer' it's not a deal breaker though, it still works with it, but removing it does simplify the message.

    Another suggestion i was thinking was "Explainer videos that sell products. Whether it's more sign ups, brand awareness or just to educate your audience – we create videos to help you do that."

    However, here I realised there is some conflict (often things are hiding in plain sight).

    In the first line the focus is on the main thing "sell products" which is quite definitive, but then on the second line, you'd be saying "and this as well".

    Then again, there is...

    "Whether it's more sign ups, brand awareness or just to educate your audience – we make/create explainer videos to help you do that."

    I think thats's my preference.

    For now. ;)

    The basic's of the message are there though, i'd just experiment with different ways of saying it, and look out for any words that can be cut.

    Just depends how simple you want to go (and if you want to add in the 'how').

    Other tips (just to complicate things) -

    If you want to add a benefit, try adding "so you can..." and see what comes up.

    Can you add a differentiator? Something that positions you apart from competitors (price, speed, quality?) Without this, you can be left with the "so what?" question.

    Good luck.

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      Just thought, surely best way to do a HIW section is with a explainer video? Two birds with one stone?

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        This is amaaaazing. Thank you so much. Yes an explainer video for Indie Intros is on its way 👀

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          You're welcome.

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    a successful landing page, especially dark mode 🚀