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Can you help me to improve my landing page for "$10 gift subscription"?

HappitClub. The joy of gifting

I need your advice. I am starting my first online project, "$10 random gift subscription" (http://happitclub.com), and at this moment I'am working on landing page. So could you pls. provide with some ideas?

  • how I can make it better.
  • or what has to be changed?

Thanks for your time!

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    You have 3 different prices on your web page:
    10$ (Get ready to get awesome presents for 10$ only)
    11$ (each month you will get a random gift (for 11$ only))
    8.33$ (just $8.33, shipped free)

    I find it confusing

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      thanks a lot I am from Europe. We use different order)

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    This is minor, but put the dollar sign ($) before the number, not after. $11 instead of 11$. I just edited the dollar signs in your post, too, to match.

    Also minor: You say "(worth 2-3 times more)", but I think it'd be more effective to just show the actual price estimate. Consider having it crossed out, too.

    The pricing is confusing. It says $11 near the top of the page, but then $8.33 elsewhere. 33 cents is a bit weird, too. If I were you I'd just go with $10.

    Is this meant for giving the same person a give every month, or for giving different people gifts every month? It's not clear. Some use-cases would be helpful. I don't know what gifts you'll be giving, so I don't know who this would be appropriate for.

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    I think that the blocks: "best price", "how it works" (black background) and "heppit helps" don`t match the design and look like blocks taken from different sites.

    I also did not find how I can contact and ask questions.

    The block on a black background ("each month..") is fluttering, it is better to somehow make a title and choose a different background.

    But I think the whole idea may work!

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    Thanks! we tried to show both product and month at the same picture but now I see the problem!

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    As far as improvements go,

    I believe previous month boxes should be more visible on the website, now it's a bit hard to connect photo to a box your subscribers received in specific month. UI looks a bit choppy.

    But idea looks good, good luck!

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    No donation required...

    http://happitclub.com/

    loaded super slow. Put it on firebase so it's in a CDN.

    Literally I saw the background image download insanely slowly.

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      Hi Kevin. Did you visit from mobile or from desktop device? Thanks!