I need your advice--what's good and what's meh about this landing page?

Hi Dan,

Congrats on getting your landing page up!
I am the co-founder at draftss.com and would love to help give a few pointers on the overall design & UI/UX.

• Maybe you can try get the PulseAbility Logo in the center since you don't have any navbar links or maybe you should add navbar links. The too much empty space on the left makes the website look incomplete
• You have used around 3 different font families on the website (Monsterrat, Lane - Narrow, Source Sans Pro). The 3 different fonts are not at playing well with each other. Try getting down to two. Maybe Monsterrat & Source Sans, Lane-Narrow looks like a very fun kind of font which isn't going well with the other font.
• "Who is influencing your customers?" is good headline, but the sub-headline isn't doing justice to it. You should try and answer the headline in sub-headline instead of starting out with how your users can save time and money.
• "(100% free to get started. No credit card required)" text underneath the signup is very small. Make it more prominent.
• Gradient in the background looks good. Maybe you can try adding some graphic on top of the headline to make it more appealing and interesting.
• I see that you have tried recreating the Old Way / New Way comparison like originally Intercom did, which is great but the old way should look boring and complicated and the new way should look clean, straightforward, simple and interesting.
• Increase the size of the green text which you have used to highlight features

If you ever revise the changes and are looking for more detailed feedback you can reach me at amin@draftss.com

Hello ,

I saw huge issues in your design and your idea is great which is not reflect in your design . So I made a quick design based on your content . You can check the design here

https://www.dropbox.com/s/c7ncacryhto9eae/PulseAbility .png?dl=0

I saw your codes and it has huge issues also .

Thanks

Thx for the information

I’m on a mobile device:

The main heading and sub headline doesn’t let me know exactly what you do. Something about influencing but it’s not clear.

Once I scroll it becomes clear. Nice that’s you talk about the problems and how you address them.

The copy has a few grammar errors.

This place “Top Tech Issues
Collaborate with clients from the comfort of your phone”

Doesn’t make sense to me. What are you trying to tell me? Is that really an issue? Influencers are tech savvy already.

What’s with that xxx?

What’s the call to action on your page? Is it to download a report, subscribe to the newsletter, or start using the platform?

You have all three. Leave it at one. Also, your main CTA should be one color. Right now, there are 2 colors and your secondary call to action (join our newsletter) is the same color.

good: I get the point of the product
meh: Few illustration were too cartoonist specially the scientist. and try to reduce the length

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