Review my landing page (PineappleBank.ca)
Hi IH!
I'm trying to build a landing page for a fictional bank, the Pineapple Bank, it's targeted to a young demographic. Ideally young professionals.
I'm not very talented at landing page, and would love some feedback on the website.
Thanks :)
Try having 'The bank of the future' larger font and more bold also this wants to be above the sub heading not below it.
Have the subheading a lighter color or thinner font.
A recommended read is 'a non designer's handbook'
Also read up on some font pairing guides.
The design is pretty decent though, not crap at all.
We millennials are hip, but "It's a bank, without the banking." is too much for me. What does that even mean? Is it.... not a bank? Is it just an app? The page copy is very vague about value prop.
Hello, thanks for your feedback. It's a bank that only has an app (no physical locations). The landing page has 4 value prop: the app, the social aspect, the no fee card and the analytics. Which one seemed vague?
Well, if it actually is a bank, it should be super clear that it is a bank. How do you make deposits? Most of the copy is around venmo-like functionality, which I don't treat as a "real" bank (I keep very low balances in there). If I was actually going to switch bank accounts, I'd want to be assured that you provide all the guarantees of a real bank.