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Copywriting. Which point of you should I use in my app?

I'm currently building a SaaS and I don't know which person I should use for in-app CTA. "Create my first document" or "Create your first document"? "Manage my team" or "Manage your team"?
I would really love to know what's the best choice and pros/cons for each.

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    I use "you" just because it sounds natural to me. No hard reasoning behind it.

    Some examples from my landing page:

    Experiment with our free plan to decide whether One One Meeting is the right solution for you

    Use our bank of recommended questions to prepare for your next meeting.
    Record your notes in a clear, uncluttered work area.

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      I totally agree for the copywriting of pages.
      It was more for the CTA in-app.

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    Point of view?

    I saved this article about that a while ago:
    https://medium.com/@jsaito/is-this-my-interface-or-yours-b09a7a795256
    See "Putting in all into perspective" paragraph for a sumup.

    Good luck!

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      Thanks for this very good resource!