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https://www.beeinformed.app/?s=ihl
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Bee Informed offers a new way of pushing out information to the world. Unlike existing channels such as newsletters, profiles on social media or similar - users of Bee Informed don't have to create an account to follow someone. Yet, the feed can be curated and tailored to their personal needs.
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We've implemented technical solution, created both android and iPhone app and opened our dashboard for free registration so that people can try it out in action.
I want to get feedback on landing page structure, wording, and general feeling if the message is communicated well.
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What left you confused, what is missing, what's preventing you from signing up?
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Thanks for the feedback
Hi Bruno,
I got the idea after checking the page for about 2-3 mins, but in real world that's like 20-30 mins.
Users will spend 5 seconds and leave, I think the problem is its hard to understand who you are talking to and what you are trying to sell.
Let me explain, this caption is where all the confusion lies:
https://i.imgur.com/16bYmJL.png
There is a step missing.
Share the QR code with your customers or display it in your shop.
By Simply scanning the QR, your customers can now follow your business. They don't need to create a profile.
You can now share offers, news, and store updates with your customers without having to worry about GDPR, Data Privacy etc.
Hope this helps.
(p.s. no offence meant, if you like my comment, please upvote it)
Good luck
Waseem
Hey Waseem,
Thanks for pointing that out, I will put some effort to clarify the general message. Thanks for your time and your detailed feedback. I like the fact that you spend some time to think about actual steps/sentences.
Cheers.