I have just updated the start page of "1st things 1st". What's your impression?
I have just updated the landing page of the strategic prioritizer "1st things 1st":
https://www.1st-things-1st.com/
What do you think of it? Does it catch your interest? Does it represent the tool clearly enough?
I think it's alright but you're wasting your h1 text to basically repeat the name of your brand. 1st things 1st
I think you should use the power of copywriting to tell your first time users what exactly you're tool does.
You said it in your post above:
A strategic prioritizer ...and then you can add something that makes it useful and unique
Perhaps it's...
I dont know ur tool but I guess ... what do people say about it?
Capture the data, see the pattern(s) then use it to your advantage.
@orliesaurus If you don't mind, please have a look again. Does it look more captivating now?
honestly? no
take a look at this page: see how it's structured and attractive for their customers:
https://pop.work
Thanks for the tip. Gonna work on it further.
Thanks @orliesaurus for a great advice! I already have an idea how to improve the h1 text.