I will humiliate your landing page in order to double your conversions

Your VP heading needs to be larger. I'm talking 50px font-size :)
Your pricing structure is simple, don't make me go on a different page. Instead, I can use that time to signup or make a cup of cold brew coffee.
Try a different CTA. "Get started" worked 40% better in a similar AB test we ran. You can also try being more specific "Start selling in 60 seconds"
The "99%" widget on the right, honestly waste of realestate. I don't think your main value proposition is that you take only 1%. You should focus instead on how easy it is. I set up stripe for my own sites, it's annoying. Flury fixes that problem. So get rid of the "99%" (honestly took me a while to "get it"). Instead, bring up the GIF from below.
Your features section, SSL is great, but your target audience will unlikely care. Instead, focus on speed to market, support (BTW: can't find any info on support), your audience will likely want to have that "just in case".
Stripe section - not sure what the idea here is, though use this space to build authority. Either a list of tools that you use, or a list of clients. If you don't have clients yet (or small number of them), you can create a section "Featured on: Indiehackers, producthunt, betalist etc).
Add secure badges in the footer. They add trust plus will fill up that whitespace in the middle :)
Testimonials are key, though hard to get (at least real ones). If you can get just one client on video talking about how easy the platform is, will do wonders. I can't stress this one enough, though I do understand it takes time/cost.

That should be plenty for now, let me know if you have any questions!

Thanks,
Aron

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https://flurly.com. Tear it apart ;)

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  Your VP heading needs to be larger. I'm talking 50px font-size :)
  
  Your pricing structure is simple, don't make me go on a different page. Instead, I can use that time to signup or make a cup of cold brew coffee.
  
  Try a different CTA. "Get started" worked 40% better in a similar AB test we ran. You can also try being more specific "Start selling in 60 seconds"
  
  The "99%" widget on the right, honestly waste of realestate. I don't think your main value proposition is that you take only 1%. You should focus instead on how easy it is. I set up stripe for my own sites, it's annoying. Flury fixes that problem. So get rid of the "99%" (honestly took me a while to "get it"). Instead, bring up the GIF from below.
  
  Your features section, SSL is great, but your target audience will unlikely care. Instead, focus on speed to market, support (BTW: can't find any info on support), your audience will likely want to have that "just in case".
  
  Stripe section - not sure what the idea here is, though use this space to build authority. Either a list of tools that you use, or a list of clients. If you don't have clients yet (or small number of them), you can create a section "Featured on: Indiehackers, producthunt, betalist etc).
  
  Add secure badges in the footer. They add trust plus will fill up that whitespace in the middle :)
  Testimonials are key, though hard to get (at least real ones). If you can get just one client on video talking about how easy the platform is, will do wonders. I can't stress this one enough, though I do understand it takes time/cost.
  
  That should be plenty for now, let me know if you have any questions!
  
  Thanks,
  Aron
  ScribeSpace.ai
  
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