[Taboo Business] Do you think my solution is good?
https://www.figma.com/proto/MDV7VN6huVSwhngrTeI2IR/Unicard?scaling=min-zoom&node-id=418%3A0
Hello,
I know it’s a taboo subject. I tried to structure the pitch in the best way,
My landing page : https://www.figma.com/proto/MDV7VN6huVSwhngrTeI2IR/Unicard?scaling=min-zoom&node-id=418%3A0
Problem : I'm afraid of dying and not being able to say important things to my relatives, friends, family. All online solutions are very creepy , and really complicated.
Solution : A simple and poetic application that dramatizes this. (We never speak about death). A beautiful card that can be kept on oneself, offer, leave some parts
Price : 19,99$ by Card shipped Worldwide.
Market : Millennials, Geeks, All around the worlds.
Landscape / Competitors : Funeral society
Progress : Landing Page > Ready- Prototype > Ready
Launch Landing Page > March - First delivered Card > May
I need your help to adjust the product market fit? Do you have any tips before you drop the final version?
Thank a lot ! 🙏
Interesting idea. Your page is visually attractive and it tells the "how" part of the story well, but it doesn't really tell me "why".
I think you could get the story across much more effectively if you added a case study. Show a few examples to help me get the idea.
Yes. I work on a new version actualy. I will try to present a case study. I think the best way is small video
Thank you !
Good landing page design dude.
How about the privacy of 'card content' ?
Good question. Two answers :
1/ nobody can see the content of my database. Not even me.
2/ If you lost your card nobody can decrypt them if they dont know the anwsers of a series of questions (5 questions precisely)
Do you think i should more precise that point on my Landing page ?
Thank for you question !
Didn't understand when reading the website what you were selling. Your description in the comments is better
Should i put that description on top of my Landing page ?
Thank you for your feed-back
Maybe this part: Problem : I'm afraid of dying and not being able to say important things to my relatives, friends, family. All online solutions are very creepy , and really complicated.
Solution : A simple and poetic application that dramatizes this. (We never speak about death). A beautiful card that can be kept on oneself, offer, leave some parts
I think that could work
Neat idea. I imagine some geeks might go for it. Where does one market such a thing :-) ?
Me too. My target is focus on geeks, super Connected people. Maybe 25 - 40 years old ? Do you see another targets or how i can touch them?
Thank you for your Feed-back
Nice !
Really like the design except it was almost unviewable on (Firefox) mobile. It seems responsive but does not resize to fit the mobile screen, also zoom was disabled :( Did you do the response viewport thingy? Just some tips, hope they help!
Apologize. Maybe this link can help you :
https://image.ibb.co/bu8Hhn/Landing_CARD_V1.png
Hi John,
Nice design and concept! Cheers!
Thank dude !
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Oh yes, sorry for that. I will change that mistake my next version.
I’m realy happy if you enjoyed my Design.
Thank!
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For the moment, it's only text. It seems to me that this is the simplest MVP to implement. I want the solution to be as simple as possible.
Thank you for your feedback.
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I will keep this card and tell my family that if something happens to me, they can know important things with this card.