💼🧠 Unvalidated Landing Page

Alright ya'll, roast my Landing page:

Unvalidated Ideas

I thought it was awesome when I first made it (very hastily), but it looks more and more lame to my eyes every time I look at it.

I think it does some things well:

• Value proposition is good
• It's simple
• It looks different

And some things badly:

• The copy is weak
• There visual flow of the text is bad
• subscribe button is kind of hard to read

Do you think I should have gone with a more "traditional" setup like Substack/Revue/Beehiiv?

If you have any newsletter landing pages you just loved so I can get some fresh inspiration.