Could I have some landing page feedback?

The biggest thing that's missing for me is a more thorough description of your services. I would want to know more about your areas of expertise. "Scaleable Microservices" doesn't tell me a whole lot. You could mention some examples.

Also, I am skeptical about the idea that one team can produce X in 2-3 weeks. Or at least that seems to leave a lot of open questions. How big is the team? What scope and complexity could this team truly handle? What kind of communication latency would be required for a 2-3 week turnaround.

On one hand you mention specifics of time and cost, but then on the other hand you don't mention specifically what kind of projects fit that framework. It's fine to describe general services so long as you enumerate all the areas of expertise. It's also fine to have a pre-packaged deliverable in mind... but be more specific.

I think you're using too many colors and the design is far from giving me the trust in such service, especially with that price.

But lets talk about what you can do to improve it instead of focusing on whats not good :)

I would suggest you to go to codecanyon or any other website and get some low cost theme for $10-$20 which will look much better but also will give you ideas on what content should be shown

Few comments:

1. the background images are too big (file size). Try simulating 3G in Chrome Dev tools to see what I mean.

2. the background images make it hard to see the text / buttons.

3. your feature boxes should be the same height.

4. there's nothing speaking to your credibility. I have no idea why I would give you a (large to me) sum of 699 a month.

5. look to improve your pricing area. here's a good example from Refactoring UI 1. https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Dcw57OyX4AA3Z_C.png

Hi Stephen,

We at draftss.com have created a feature for founders to fetch constructive feedback on their landing page.

Have a look: http://draftss.com/feedback.html