Does this landing page even make sense !
Hi, I am not that confident in my copy write. I make a landing page demo, does it look ok? what do you understand from it!
Any feedback is welcomed.
Hi, I am not that confident in my copy write. I make a landing page demo, does it look ok? what do you understand from it!
Any feedback is welcomed.
hmmm.
don't tell me about the pain of modern trading apps on your launch page. instead, tell me what you do so well.
putting tick marks by that list of pains also makes it seem a little like a good thing, but then it's listed under pains, so it's confusing.
you just need one page, not three - faq & features should be on the home page.
yor grammar needs a little hand - for example, it should be "No more funds locked in transit". Also, as i write this, right under that sentence you have "with tradalot you can..." but the site says "tradeplan".
What is the name of the product, tradealot or tradeplan?
Also you use capital letters, so why isn't tradalot/tradeplan capitalised?
Might benefit from an image of your trading thing (or what you envision it looking like) so that it's not just text?
Fully agree with this:
Or take it one step further and show me how your product solve each of these pain points.
Good luck!
Jonathan
-I get it you want to know what I offer but i am worried that user may not understand why the need for it.
-It the limitation of the template. I couldn't change it. I guess I will use it for detailing what i offer.
-I had 1 page first, then changed to this version due to long FAQ section.
-Its Tradeplan, i used Tradealot as a pace keeper, i hunted them down again were i missed them.
-I am working on the UI part may have it in a week, felt bad about using a random pic from the internet.
Thanks for your feedback and attention to details. Does the features and Faq text make the product clear to you ?
The features & faq aren't clear, no. I get that it's allowing me to do some trading things - but what's the value of these things?
You might want another page that explains the value - either with an example or something similar.
If people won't understand the need for it, then discussing problems that other companies have still doesn't sell your company.
I'd use random images from the internet to get more feedback and interest while you work on the UI that will probably take you a few weeks. That's a few weeks of no feedback, which isn't very helpful.
Thanks, will work on your feedback and update again . Maybe a medium Post for something linked may do the job.