Experienced writers - care to critique my article?

Hello IH,

I am looking for fellow IH's who are experienced writers who can critique my medium post/article.

https://medium.com/flightlist/why-i-built-flightlist-solved-my-own-problem-c95885665665

My goal is to write something inspiring about my side-project I can share with journalists and travel bloggers to see if I can gain exposure. I have no idea if it will work but I want to test it out.

I thought if I wrote an interesting/inspiring article it would help my chances.

However, I am not the best of writers and I would love to have someone who is to review it and see how I could improve it.

Thanks in advance IH's.

Hans