February 4, 2018

Feedback on my landing page redesign?

Hi IH,

It's quite hard to be objective on its own redesign. What do you think about my SaaS landing page ? Is that enough clear ? Should I had or remove something ? Do not be shy, let me know what you think.

the home page: https://mysocialapp.io

and the pricing page : https://mysocialapp.io/pricing/


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    Salut Romaric !

    I just visited the french version of your website. First thing I noticed was the Hero text being in english whilst everything else was in french.

    I also had a quick look at your source code and the structure seems a bit weird. How did you code it ?

    Try to drop one font too. Poppins seems a bit out of place. Try also to give your containers a max width of 960px. Regarding the Navbar, swap your PNG logo image for an SVG if you can. It's just crisper.

    Finally, here is a great website if you need some inspiration: https://land-book.com/

    Last thing I'd like to point out whilst being brutally honest (sorry): in terms of UI and UX, it does not look really professional. It lacks the polish and the consistency I'd expect from an enterprise grade SaaS.

    If you'd like to further discuss that (UI and design), just hit me up!

    Nico

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    Hi Romaric,

    Interesting project! I have some feedback that might better help users understand your service and value proposition.

    I think the header text might be a bit confusing: "Get your iPhone and Android social app today". It isn't clear to me whether it's asking me to download your social app, or create my own, or something else entirely.

    It appears that the value proposition is letting users create an app on multiple platforms, without doing any coding. If that's correct, I'd make that your heading: "Create social apps for your business, without writing code" etc.

    2 buttons given equal prominence: "Getting Started" / "Create My App", this could be confusing - are getting started and creating the app not the same thing? Ideally there would be one call to action that funnels users to sign up.

    What do the Apple / Android store buttons under 'Try Your Future App' section do? As a user I haven't created my app yet, which could cause confusion. Are they demos of the kinds of apps that I could build using your service? If so I'd say that on the page, it's your chance to show off what your product can do after all!

    There are a few grammatical errors on the page, I think having a fluent English speaker proof read the page for you would be a worthwhile investment.

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      Hi @joshb , thank you for these gold advice. This is a huge help and you are correct for all points. It's definitely important for us to have fluent English speaker to make it more pro. Do you know any online service that can provide pro translator ?

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    The hero element is rendering too high on my 2013 Macbook Air

    Image of rendering: https://ibb.co/iEe0dx

    I think the headline could be clearer. "Get your iPhone and Android social app today". Who is your market? What is the solution? What is the why?

    I would add an explainer video instead of the "Getting Started" button.

    I would add more customer testimonials. Video is best but text quotes work well too with the customer's image next to it.

    Today, I'd move the "They trust us" section up to just below the hero. Sell with your social proof up front.

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      Hi @harrywhelchel , thank you for these advice.

      "Who is your market? What is the solution? What is the why?"

      Ok I get it, I am gonna change the headline to fit these requirements.

      "I would add an explainer video instead of the "Getting Started" button."

      We plan to do professional promotional video in the next weeks.

      "I would add more customer testimonials."

      This is a good point.

      "Today, I'd move the "They trust us" section up to just below the hero."

      I make the change right now :)

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        You are welcome!

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    Hey there, it's cool! but

    I have to point two things, you are repeating the logo and when hovering on "Create my app" I can't see the text anymore https://image.prntscr.com/image/nJpnEl_sT3uYZ2eDp_zOJg.png

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      @Janva I made the changes, thank you mate

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      Hi @Janva , thank you for your report, I fix that. Do you think I should remove the logo ? I can try without

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    No time for deep feedback but:

    "Custom your app by your needs"

    You probably mean "Customize..."

    Looks interesting otherwise!

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      You right, thanks :) Hope to hear from your deep feedback later ;)

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    What do you guys do?

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