September 18, 2018

feedback on new landingpage

At the end of June, I replied to this post on IH (https://www.indiehackers.com/forum/offer-ih-copywriting-and-designing-for-your-startup-idea-digital-product-service-693cbe9826) where MNstudio (https://mnstudio.net/) was offering to redesign and to copywrite for 2 indie hackers.

We agreed to wait 2 months before checking the metrics and see how much their job improved conversion, but, regardless of the outcome, 2 months of their work saved me a lot of time.

In addition to the new design, they spent time understanding what I was doing, asking for feedback in forums about my product and created a copywriting starting from a completely different point of view (mine probably was too technical).

I still need to optimize a couple of things, but any honest feedback on the new layout and copywriting is very appreciated :)


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    Hi Clagio,

    That's great. Helping each other is what makes a community better. That's precisely we created a feature for founders to get constructive feedback for their side projects/startups.

    URL: http://draftss.com/feedback.html

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    I think the "Request Early Access" button is not easily accessible...

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      do you think it should be more centered?

      ps. I found also some visualization problems with big screen

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        I think that can help, my eyes keep checking the center, so I guess will be more easy to find the button...