October 1, 2018

Give me feedback on my landing page and rate my idea

Kindly give me feedback on my landing page and the idea itself


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    This isn't Drift's LeadBot is it? https://www.drift.com/leadbot/

    If not, you're competing with a lot of well established conversational marketing bots that use a freemium model.

    Do you know who are you targeting? Your headline says webforms are the problem. For who? Is the problem you're solving -- website visitors not filling out web forms?

    Why can't I interact with the bot right from the landing page?

    Do you have any case studies that you can add? Can you show results of sites that have implemented your bot? Why should someone add a bot to their website?

    The call to action is vague. It's an email subscribe. It's free but only for one month and there's no other pricing information. Why would I be motivated to try something out for a month without knowing what it'll cost if I like it and want to keep using it?

    The gif does show the features of a chatbot but the landing page doesn't talk about any of the pain points or clear description of who your audience is.

    Take a look here to get ideas to improve the landing page:

    https://stackingthebricks.com/is-bad-copy-killing-your-product/

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      Thanks alot @ness , you have hit the nail on the head and it has taken me back to the drawing board.Let me compile everything well and get back to you soon.Thanks a lot

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    Hey Okii - cool idea, but how is this different from Intercom / Drift / etc? I think it would be valuable if you spelled out some of these on your landing page.

    Good luck!

    Jonathan

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      check it now sir

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      Thanks alot @jianinglai, have received your feedback and I will surely have to include it so that users are able to distinct it