Hey Guys..! Please provide feedback on my SaaS landing Page..:)
Hello IH,
My name is G from California. I'm somewhat new to IH community, I'm a non-tech and have been working on my SaaS for some time as a side project. I'm getting to launch soon so please any feedback on the landing page....I would appreciate!
My goal was to create a web-app(SaaS) with features similar to an eCommerce store. How everything is evolved around "Product(s) ". I created Syrreo.com with that in mind!
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Select Customer from the Customer Database,
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Select Due, add Subject/Heading
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Select Product & attributes from the dropdowns
4 Update Qty, or add the discount, or additional description for the customer/client or add any internal comments, or upload any attachments pertaining to the order.
- Save.
Each order goes through a workflow from New Order > Awaiting Approval > Approved>WIP>Completed.
This keeps YOU(the boss), your staff and your clients in the loop, know what's going on with each and every order/project anywhere in the world.
Thanks in advance
PS - I made couple of small changes based on the feedback.
Have you considered making a video with the steps you listed in the post? I feel if I know how your product works on the inside, I'm pretty much immediately sold.
I wrote an article about how you can quickly make a video with a screen recorder, and my own product: https://medium.com/@zohaibahmed/creating-product-video-voice-over-with-voicepods-in-30-seconds-b05ddf92743e
Hey Zahem, You're right, I'll work on making a short video. Which should help explain the product.
Thanks for the feedback.
Hey, I want some ideas for the creation of my landing page.
If someone has enough time to advise or help me regarding this.
ping me or mail me at: sofianksk@gmail.com
@SofiaK Put your request in the Community form. Also, give details about what you're trying to accomplish, color scheme if you have it, content, is SaaS or mobile app, etc. You'll get plenty of feedback.
Landing page is quite attractive, loving the color scheme and overall brand direction. That being said, I still didn't understand what the product does, at least not right way. The first copy at the top is very ineffective. It took some scrolling down a bit to get to
Syrreo is a business management application
with integrated workflow, CRM, quotes, orders,
projects, task modules & invoices.
Plus employee, customer portal and more
Which gives some more clarity. I would move this right up front. Simplify it if you can. People don't like to read, don't make them read.
Overall though it looks very polished, instills trust, and you're going in the right direction!
Thank for the feedback. I do agree with you about being simple and easy to understand. I'm going to work on that.. once again Thank you for the feedback.
design wise looks good, but not sure what it does, also the static top header seems a bit to large and it takes screen real estate, important for laptop/tablet people.
I agree with you.. I'm going to revise the LA a little bit before I go beta testing. Thanks for your feedback.
Hey there, G. Let's have a look.
"WE’LL HELP YOU MANAGE YOUR BUSINESS" Okay, no need to shout. 😀 I think that might be a tad too generic. Explain to me how you're going to help me exactly.
"delivering leading solutions for freelancers agencies and small businesses." Eh, avoid hype ("leading") and B2B clichés ("solutions") as much as you can. Just simply state what you do.
Visual on the right doesn't really tell me what the product is/does.
"Syrreo is a business management application with integrated workflow, CRM, quotes, orders, projects, task modules & invoices. Plus employee, customer portal and more!" That's a pretty good summary of what the product is, would be a good replacement for the paragraph in your hero section.
Overall, your landing page lacks a few important elements. 1) Who is it for? Lots of businesses need CRMs, invoicing software, etc. but which ones are you targeting? 2) How is it different? You say what you do, but not how you're doing it better. Show me why I should pick you instead of someone else. 3) Says who? You need to get some user testimonials ASAP to get credibility. B2B software is incredibly hard to sell without trust, especially if you're targeting large companies.
Hope that helps. 🙂
Thanks for detail feedback David. I'm def. going back to the drawing board and re-write the entire copy. I like the questions you brought up.. I'm going to answer each one within the landing page. Once again Thank you for the feedback.
Nice LP, but also for me took quite a long to understand what you are offering :) keep as much simple as you can.
Only one problem found, I've clicked on Syrreo image in the footer but it returns no webpage :(
Hey Marco, Thanks for the feedback and pointing out the Syrreo image in the footer. It's been fixed :).
Thanks,
Looks great! Like the previous person said, polish up your copy. Also, I would personally add a drop shadow to the iMac.
Good job though!
Thank you, I'm going to work on this! Much appreciate it!
Looks freaking awesome!!! For a non-tech guy, that's very very impressive. I'm a non-tech guy myself and what you built exceeds anything I've ever done. What did you build it with?
Thanks! I used WordPress to build the entire site. I'm learning how to use WordPress. I Googled HOW TO.... in WordPress and watched a bunch of videos and read articles.