I am starting a new venture and need some feedback on my landing page.
I am starting a new venture and I've put together a simple landing page. I need some feedback on if my messaging is clear enough of what I am trying to sell.
I am starting a new venture and I've put together a simple landing page. I need some feedback on if my messaging is clear enough of what I am trying to sell.
Looks good!
Try adding product video (easy to understand) in the home page, instead pouring words.
Show your portfolio or clientèle if any...
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Conversion, Extracting and Migration Experts
Make that
Conversion, Extraction, and Migration Experts.
The industry terminology is ETL, extract transform load. You might want to put that in your copy somewhere to match those keywords.
Why would I contact you instead of using an industry standard ETL tool and developers? You need to explain why you're a better option.
Thank you Craig.
Checked it out on mobile and has good mobile-friendliness.
My 3 points would be:
provide a “use cases” section of how somebody could use your services.
could use some better imagery. Less stock photo. I always fear sites who look too stock.
As Colin said, hit the benefits Moreno of WHY I should use you and not the guy next door. After you make a claim about your service, ask yourself “but why should I care?” Until you hit the root of the benefit.
Good work so far, though. Good luck!
Thank you Dave.
Hi Rudolph,
After going through the page I understand what you offer, but it is certainly not apparent right off the bat.
Your USP (Unique Selling Proposition) that you deliver in your header should clearly say what it is that your potential customers would benefit from. BENEFIT from. Not what you offer. Everything is about manipulating data in some kind, so i would set it up to scroll the keywords between the sentence "your data" with a short sentence explaining the benefit of doing that. eg;
"Convert" your data
"Extract" your data
"Automate" your data
Thank you Colin.