Landing page feedback! What do you guys think?
I'm really trying to build something special at www.moneysite.com
I would love to know what do you guys think about the landing page.
Let me know your thoughts.
I'm really trying to build something special at www.moneysite.com
I would love to know what do you guys think about the landing page.
Let me know your thoughts.
Is the aim of this to be a community akin to indie hackers?
I don't want to sound negative but my first impression was that this was similar to one of these 'get rich quick' style sites. I didn't feel much trust in the design as others have pointed out.
Probably the main things I would work on are:
Tightening up the copy. Can you explain what this does more succinctly? Why do I as a visitor care?
Changing your design to inspire more trust. I think that the name 'MoneySite' is the first red flag for me as that makes me think the primary purpose is getting rich or something.
As @jianinglai mentioned, the icons don't really fit. If you're stuck then even something simple like Font Awesome would work here. I know it can be seen as boring, but they're also familiar.
General design tweaks such as a nicer font, and better use of colour. You may find this helpful: https://twitter.com/i/moments/879086180909764608?lang=en.
Again, I hope this didn't sound negative or discouraging. I know how hard it can be to put yourself out there with a product, and it's great that you've come this far already. Hopefully you found this helpful :)
Brutal feedback lol But I love it, I think I will be able to do some nice improvements after all this helpful feedback, I'm already working on it.
I do want to stay away from those get rich websites and do something more valuable. I need to keep that in mind. Thanks for the feedback @ruairidhwm
Glad that you found it helpful, looking forward to seeing what you come up with!
Similar to some comments below. It feels like the 'get rich quick' sites. A few things:
Things are never free, what is your business model? Are you going to sell personal data :)
What evidence do you have, the third most important thing after explaining the situation/problem and your solution.
Thanks for the feedback @tijshensen
I'm working on it.
My feedback :
First impression i don't feel any trust about the top message, we encounter the same style everywhere
You could give the 'free' feature more attention, it'll encourage people to go in
Sign in form need to be more attractive (a lot of templates available for inspirations )
Best of luck
Hi @zanguim thank you so much for your feedback.
What do you think would be a better message? Can you please send me a suggestion?
I would say give people more of an incentive to give you their email address. Plus you need to explain more about what you do on the home page.
Hi @Lenny thank you so much for your feedback.
Any suggestion about the incentive?
I will try to put more information in the website, but I dont want to put too much info because I know must users will not read anyways...
Just add an incentive that matters a lot to your target audience. It can be an ebook, email course or even a video series. It just has to be on a topic they care about.
Also, there can never be too much information on a landing page unless it's boring. Must of your visitors don't know about your website. A long page lets users learn more.
Here is some feedback:
Is your project a magazine? I ask because that is what the image on the right hand side looks like.
caught one small typo: "archive your financial goals". I think you mean "achieve your financial goals"?
not a fan of the icons you've selected. Since they are cartoonish, it doesn't establish trust (at least for me). And I think establishing trust is important especially since your project is all about finances.
Good luck!
Jonathan
Thank you so much for your feedback @jianinglai
Yes its a mix of magazine and community.
About the icons, I think you bring a good point, I actually tried other icons before but was looking very generic. What icons would you recommend? Any suggestions?
That I won't be able to answer!
But to get you started, check out https://www.flaticon.com/
(that is where I got a lot of icons for my project, www.tribefive.me)
Most icons there also look very cartoonish :)
I wonder how I can step way from the cartoonish look without looking too generic and boring.