What do you think about my landing page?
And another landing page I'd like your opinion on, because I got some great feedback last time!
My intention was to make it very simple. So, what do you think? What would you change?
EDIT: I've mocked up a new design which I think may be clearer. What do you think?
If it's a landing page, delete the top/right navigation (it distracts from your CTA and you have them on the page anyway). Also, I don't consider 'beautiful,' and 'simple' to be features per se. No popups! Finally, I'd like to see an app-demo (animation) on the right of the CTA (instead of a static black box) - SHOW me how it works and how cool it is!
I agree with the nav, as it is just a small landing page.
I'm working on some videos/gifs to replace the screenshot :)
Hi Dani,
My draftss.com team would love to provide you with a constructive feedback. You can reach them here: http://draftss.com/feedback.html
Possibly soften the background from pure white? That way the brightness and contrast of the landing page don't contradict the "incredibly easy on the eye" description.
Also, the "Type something!" prompt doesn't go away when I type something. If that's tricky to achieve, maybe start the cursor on the next line?
Unrelated: for the Windows client, you might want to try using Segoe UI (around 12- or 14-point) as the default font.
Thanks for the feedback!
"Type something!" isn't a placeholder, it's just existing text that you can delete and replace rather than write over. I understand that it can be annoying though so I'll change it.
Thanks for the font recommendation!
Hi,
Comically, the chat bot popped up right when I read "No popups".
My thoughts while scanning the page:
Ooh, clean design
It's an app. For iOS/phones? Mac/desktop?
Is this for text? Pictures? (Not sure why but my head went to taking pictures of hand written paper notes I'd pass to friends in grade school. Illogical, I know but it's what I thought)
There's 3 colors, I still don't know what this app looks like
"No popups" - hey there's a popup - I'm going back to write my comment
Oh, I thought it just popped up on clicking the button! 😱I'll look into it.
It's a Mac & Windows desktop app. There's more than 3 colors.
I'll get to revamping that page to show a bit more info. And be less popup-y! :D Thanks for the feedback!
You say it's simple, distraction free and beautiful.
But why not show what it looks like ?
I have a little preview where it says "Try me out". Got it though, more screenshots would be better.