August 16, 2018

Would love some landing page feedback!

Yep, this is yet another landing page feedback request!

Over the past few days, I have been working on improving our landing page. Our current one doesn't do a good job at all of selling our product. Our new landing page looks much nicer and highlights some of our features. It definitely needs more work but I think this is a good start. Marketing and sales are definitely not my strongest skills so I am trying to improve them.

Our new landing page:

https://filiosoft.com

Thanks!


  1. 2
    • Text is fairly explanatory, not waffling

    • text at above the fold is too small, and I think you would be better off having some imagery here

    • definitely need more page copy

    • needs a lot more copy explaining tool, features, benefits, differentiators

  2. 2

    Nice job! A few things that come to mind:

    The font is a bit small on the header and title on the landing page. Would make the value proposition pithy, large and in your face. I would increase the CTA button and pick one (e.g., sign up) and possibly 'learn more' as a secondary CTA. If you think the product is too complex/not intuitive from the description, feel free to flip the two.

    Anytime you can use images/visuals do so (picture is worth 1000 words) - I would suggest using a screenshot of the app or something similar to quickly communicate the core value proposition to the user.

    Good luck!

  3. 2

    Hi, I'm Fauz.io

    i will review some point.

    (mobile version perspective)

    Probably, you must to fix this:

    1. Menu bar: rather than moving you logo and burger icon, slide your menu down and keep the menu bar static on the top.

    2. Welcome section

    2a. inconsistent text align

    2b. Replace 'tool to power you next event' - > 'Event Management Software Refined' or 'The new standard in event monitoring' or something like that, improve it.

    2c. Replace button text to - > Get Free 3 Months, Contact Our Sales or Schedule Your Demo. Make it actionable text.

    1. Feature section

    3a. Title: replace to 'features you will love'

    3b. Inconsistent text align

    1. Footer : move copyright text to the bottom of the page

    Probably, you must add this:

    1. Client logo

    2. Client testimonials

    3. Demo video or product screenshot

    4. Pricing

    What i love?

    1. White spaces

    2. Icons

    3. Font family and font size

    4. Simple and consistent color

    Wait, i think you should pay me for this review. Lol, kidding 😂

    Good luck!