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๐Ÿ˜… 11 landing page feedbacks in 46 minutes

I love learning about new products and I try to give honest landing page feedback to people who post on IndieHackers.

So once a week I take an half an hour to go through all the products of the day, record my first hand impressions and give some feedback.


About the video.

  • I tried to stay positive but realistic about your landing page
  • If I was harsh in judging your page, I don't mean anything personally but I like to be honest
  • If I misunderstood something or have any feedback, reply in the comments with what I might have missed/forget

These 11 makers made the list on this Friday's edition of my landing page video:

@rene with https://vina.dev: The website to build an online resume + communityh
@bloggeroutreach with https://www.bloggeroutreach.com/: SEO backlinking services
@offsky with https://www.movienight.tips/ : Helping parents find movies to watch with kids
@txroy001 with https://dormio.co/: A website selling tea
@rywils21 with https://tidyworkspace.com/: A google chrome extension to manage Google tabs and accounts
@mammouth with https://en.mathsport.ca/: A ๐Ÿ shoe manufacturer with a twist
@docdown with https://docdown.co/: 5 min website builder with Google docs
@kayz0r with https://www.schemaboost.com/: Data tool for SEO
@ardalan with https://t.co/vNnQkLSLc0?amp=1: AI tool to monitor things that change online & more
@cridev with https://productlistings.app/: Effortlessly build product listings for auctions on ebay, craigslist etc
@sungho with https://learnobit.com/: A tool to speed up learning

You guys are hard workers ๐Ÿ’ชand I wanted to say congrats for building these things! People like you make this community welcoming and always fun to be part of.
Thanks

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    Thank you for taking the time to go through them - excellent insights :)

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      You're welcome :) I hope to contribute as much as I can to the community these days!

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    Wow wow wow thank you a ton for making this video! Your feedback is wildly helpful. I'm gonna go make changes today.

    I supported you on Patreon! Let me know if there's anything else you'd like me to do to help you out.

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      Thank you for your generosity, a simple subscription to my channel was enough, but this is even more amazing: you're really kind!
      I am glad you enjoyed the feedback, let me know how I can help you further down the line!

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    Thanks @orliesaurus for your feedback! I enjoyed the format especially the drawing on the screen & being descriptive with h1 & h2 tags etc. Very very helpful, thank you!

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      Thanks, if you ever do updates I can do another review and compare before and after!

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        Yeah awesome! ๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿ™Œ

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    Thanks for the feedback about https://www.schemaboost.com it indeed helps and I am going to do some adjustments right now.

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      Yeah i think with your page specifically, you need to condense the design down to focus on the benefits (for the user id business) of using your tool. A copywriter can help you cut the noise vs signal ratio, to have only signal!

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        Btw I did the updates you suggested on your video (moved the case studies out of that box, and made the headline easier for users.)

        Cheers and thanks for the feedback.

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        Thanks, I am doing it right now. My plan is once I have final version, is to make new home pages (with the help of copy writers) then I'll do A/B testing and see the results. But I think I have a lot to improve first before reaching to copy writers.

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    Thank you for the feedback on https://productlistings.app โœŒ๏ธ

    +1 for the format of the reviews!

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      Great demo of your product, needs a little work on the structure of the page, which is IMHO a little all over the place. There's a framework that works, (I'll write it down tomorrow) you should follow it!

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        ๐Ÿ‘Œ Just updated the site with your suggestions, tried to clean the looks up a bit

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          PS: the urls to the product pages all have a final : , which breaks navigation

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            Good catch! Url parser got confused! Fixed!

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    Do you still give feedback for websites? We are about to launch and would love to hear your opinion! The top videos were super exciting.
    https://paperless.io/

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      Yes go on my Patreon page to request one https://www.patreon.com/landingfeedback

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        Thanks for the help!

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    Thank you for roasting my landing page. Upon hearing your feedback, I immediately changed several components...

    But do you think the phrase 'All Learner's Hyper Booster' is not good?

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      I don't know what it means "All learner's hyper booster" ? what are you trying to say?

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    @orliesaurus I'm going to change the final screen of the demo video based on your feedback. You didn't notice the change between the before/after screenshots (there was a new discount coupon). I need to show a more clear example.

    Thanks a lot for the feedback ๐Ÿ™

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      Cool! There's probably more stuff to fix, sorry I didnt get around to analyzing your landing page ;(

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    Enjoyed watching your video! Cheers to all that submitted ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘

    Hereโ€™s my landing page: https://myvesselapp.com/

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        Just an fyi, updated my landing page incorporating your feedback. Figured you may appreciate an update :) https://myvesselapp.com

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          I love the new content! and the more about you in the page gives it a way more concrete feel!

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        BTW, if thereโ€™s something I can help you with let me know.

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          You're very kind, stay safe on the boat! we need more dreamers out there!

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        Thank you! Much appreciated. That was fun to watch and listen to your feedback.

        It will be nice to adjust and explore those components. ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ‘โ›ต๏ธ

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          Great, glad to hear that - if you enjoyed the video consider subscribing to the channel (it's free & shows me i'm appreciated during these trying times;P)

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            Already subscribed :) thanks again!!

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      Will take a look next!

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        Since you are thinking of what to do next time ๐Ÿ˜Ž , I made small changes on http://datapeek.org . Not worth a full review , but I'd still love to have your opinion !

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    Would you mind sharing feedback on: https://swissdevjobs.ch/contact

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      Will take a look next!

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      I am happy to be helpful ๐Ÿคฒ๐Ÿคฒ

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