Any ideas for this dialog?
I'm trying out a smoke test with a dialog that appears when you click "choose" on the premium plan in the pricing section.
Right now, it's kind of lame, do you guys have any ideas on how to improve this?
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Couple thoughts. The button could be more actionable. I'm not sure what I'd do with a "Premium" button. I might consider "Go Premium" or even better - don't make it a button but create opportunities for me to discover features that are actually Premium so that I can learn about Premium when I actually need the value it is promising. You could try a "Do more with Tag My Knowledge Premium" button; suggest it's not a big bold design but a more subdued header link. Do more?! Sign me up. How can I do more. The tradeoff with less boldness and more clarity is better informed leads.
That is all before reading the copy.
The headline is ok. It's a bit of a downer since I already don't know what Premium is; the first thing I read is that it's not ready? Then the body text is overly wordy. You could simplify it and make my life easier by writing something like:
Body: We're working hard on even more useful features, like A and B. Drop your email below to be notified when it's ready.
Maybe even a quick GIF from a design prototype so I know what's coming (if you know).
Thanks a lot for your suggestions!
I decided to remove the premium page for now, but I introduced the first premium feature within the app itself (it's a pretty cool Twitter bot!).
When you click on it you get a 30 day free trial and afterwards you can decide to upgrade to premium.
Design prototype is a great idea, although I don't have something like that currently. I'll use the Twitter bot once I enable the page again.
To be honest this looks okay to me. If someone wanted to buy your product, this wouldn't be a hard step to take.