Any volunteers to be early testers on my new offer?
Looking for volunteers to help test out a new offer we are preparing to launch.
Page currently between design, content and marketing teams.... but wanting to get some initial feedback on the offer itself first. This community seems like the perfect place to test it.
Any feedback on the offer welcomed. Page itself is work in progress.
And if anyone would like to try it out even better, fill in the form on the page to take part.
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Thanks for the early feedback, plus those who requested (and received) their free reports.
Page is getting there for an initial release so jumping in and improving it as we go.
If anyone else is looking for help on their website, all welcome at https://awcode.com/free-professional-website-report/
Hi Mark,
I agree with @rajanmr, the page does look very dated. But as you say, you're redesiging the page already.
Offer-wise, the content is good, but I would say it is too wordy. There is a lot of sales copy for what is essentially quite a simple offer. It makes a very appealing offer feel like there is a catch because of the over-sell.
I would go as far as to say that the typeform embed at the bottom of the page sells your offer more than the rest of the page does. It outlines the offer, how to get it, and when you will receive it all in a clean an concise way.
Either way, the offer is very attractive. You just need to avoid talking yourself out of the sell.
I hope that helps
Jon
Thanks Jon, good points. Will look into how to apply.
Might AB test skipping the page and straight to the typeform when ready to promote to see how that compares.
My honest feedback, your landing page looks a bit outdated but conveys the message clearly. Signed up for the review report, will wait for the same and leave additional feedback.
Thanks for the feedback.
Completely understand comment on the visuals, page is pre-design, just wanted to quickly test the messaging. Glad that part is clear.
Will get your report over soon.