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Can you roast my landing page? Analytics Tool for Indie Hackers

Hi 👋
Can you roast my landing page? https://truestory.ink/

I'll return the favor. 😊

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    Hi Nuzair

    I did a video with my feedback:
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xMUeFqn_g3w

    I hope that this could be useful
    Good luck!

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      Thanks Victor! It was very helpful

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    I like the modern and minimalist look of the website. It however feels like some elements are out of place:

    • Everything is too large and too scattered. I would make the fonts smaller and bring everything closer to the centre
    • When I read "Watch your website visitors in action" I'd like to see an image or preferably an animated image of the dashboard to see what you are talking about.
    • you don't always need a logo and a menu bar, but in your case I feel like it's missing
    • Contacts, privacy policy, terms and conditions, etc are all missing and many people (including myself) won't sign up without them.
    • The price should either be higher, or preferably linked to in a menu bar as I mentioned earlier.
    • The animated images for step 1-3 are of low quality.

    Again, as I browse your page, I can't emphasize enough that everything feels too large and too scattered, which is a shame because your design is nice.

    Good luck!

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      Thanks man! Very much appreciate it!! This is some useful feedback :) I'll work on it

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    Hey!

    Thought your website was quite nice :)
    but here are a few things I noticed:

    1. would be nice to have a some sorta GIF or maybe screenshot of the actual product in the Hero banner? That would def make me more interested (here you don't have to wait for a user to scroll down)

    2. the animations or screen recordings on the website were quite laggy (unless that is not the case and could be only my device then it should be all good)

    3. I'd make the animations a bit smaller because it's quite hard to read the text beside it (distracting as there is a lot going on. Your first section where it's insight and validate is really good!)

    4. Maybe the get notified, unlimited websites, and free forever banner can come later? Because the user hasn't seen your product up until that point and when I read it, I wasn't sure what how that benefited me; but once I saw the entire landing page then those 3 points made more sense.

    Hope that helped :)

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      This is amazing! Thank you so much

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        You're welcome!

        Also, would love some feedback on our landing page www.ezid.io :)

        Hope you don't mind!

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            oh dude, thank you so much!! :) This valuable feedback and will def make those changes

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