[Case Study ] Murmur | Optical AI for Local Advertising |Feedback on my writing skills

by Emin Aliyev

Hi founders, recently i started writing about my startup and what we are doing. Finally, I decided to read the case study, and need your feedback. How do you think I need to improve my writing skills?
https://eminfaliyev.medium.com/how-murmur-helped-local-turkish-coffee-shop-to-grow-and-w[…]starbuck-fb6563689044?sk=eb93d4e68e9d35a26ca78e2764d6df71

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on March 21, 2021

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