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Critisise our Landing Page - Go!

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    First off, your mixed family is beautiful!

    I would go with fewer colors and a lot less text. Build for skimming, not real reading
    And I like the "count me in" CTA copy on one of the buttons. I would decide what the 1 thing you want someone to do when they hit your site is and only have that CTA

    try this layout from Marketing Examples https://marketingexamples.com/conversion/landing-page-guide

    To be specific to you:
    1/ Explain the value you provide (title)

    2/ Explain how you'll create it (subtitle)

    3/ Let the user visualise it (visual)

    • the prototype you have on the black starry background is great for this!

    4/ Make it believable (social proof)

    • do you have any thoughts from potential customers? If not, I'd start marketing the app idea and see what people's reactions are, then use some of that positive feedback (with permission!) as the social proof. Ask people who joined the Beta why they joined too.

    5/ Make taking the next step easy (CTA)

    • here's where the "join the waitlist" or "count me in to the Beta" would be a good fit

    6/ Make the value concrete (features and objections)

    • your existing features section is great here -> I'd just half the amount of copy

    7/ Inspire action (social proof)

    8/ Tie up loose ends (FAQ)

    9/ Repeat your call to action (2nd CTA)

    10/ Make yourself memorable (Founder's note)

    • I'd change the layout of what you currently have and cut some of the copy

    Also, I'm on desktop, I would check the site on mobile, I have a sneaky suspicion that this site is too long on mobile.

    Wishing you the best of luck and please let me know if you have any questions!

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      Hi Sophia

      Thanks for the feedback.
      I will look at your comments and see what we can implement. Apologies for delayed reply.

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    Hi there!

    I would change that black background to a somewhat lighter color.

    You have an excellent background, IMHO, where you showcase your app. That would be a great background.

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      Thank you for your feedback. The background that we use in App Section is a simple white color with circles overlay. I am unsure how this would look with top navigation menu though. I see potential clash there of colors and elements.

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