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Does my website need copy writing?

by Frank Scher

MessengerSell — Instant Shop: you don't need an online store anymore!

messengersellwebsite-staging.herokuapp.com

I am targeting firstly english speaking public, so:

  1. Website at: https://messengersellwebsite-staging.herokuapp.com/
  2. Reading the text on my website, would you say it needs a revision by a professional copywriter?
  3. Can you describe in a sentence whats the service I am sell
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    1. The content seems clear, but I'm missing how your product solves the issues you have listed (e.g. "Goodbye, complex platforms!" - I'd add something like "MessengerSell is a super-simple platform which can set up your shop in 5 minutes" or something similar). Not sure about professional copywriter review though.
    2. Online store in an instant messenger (???)

    One thing which seemed off: "Instant Shop". I'm guessing this is a previous name of your product and you would want to change it.

    Good luck! :)

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