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Does this landing page make you want to roast it?

Looking for constructive feedback on our landing page.
What works and what doesn't? Feel free to let it loose.

https://www.looppanel.com/

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    There just isn't enough here. The product seems cool, but the description is too broad. What exactly is this?

    I don't think you need the "Want to know more? Click here." line at the top. Just not necessary since it only scrolls users down a tiny bit.

    Need more than one bullet point in your checklist on the second panel. Really should have at least three (so same goes for the next panel).

    Is there some way you can give people more of a picture of what this product actually looks like before asking them to give you their email?

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      Thanks for the feedback, Nick. We will make changes so that the value proposition is clearer.

      Was there any specific part that made you think of it as cool? I am curious.

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        Well I'm all about customer pain points. My product (SurveySays) helps companies uncover those, too. The product is just something I think should spark any business owner's interest. But the offer on the page is too vague.

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    Hi Akash, I like the layout and flow. Not much to add other than, maybe it's a good idea to show screenshots of the user dashboard instead of the company logos for integration and wireframe for the "easily share..."

    ALl the best!

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    Hey! I like the page! it looks very soft and the text/images are well distributed, just have some things for my perspective:

    • The "header" Logo looks pixeled, you could use an svg file to improve this, same with the first "Get an unbiased view..." image section, you could get all those images as svg files
    • I like how the information is rearrange on mobile, but there are no space between sections, it feels like "too much text" (insert "too much text" meme here)

    other than that, I like the design 🙆🏻‍♀️

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      Thanks for the feedback and particularly the tip about using svg.

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