Feedback for my landing page?


Launchweb is a simple to use no-code website builder that focuses on creating One Page Portfolio Websites.

Launchweb provides templates of various sections of a website (ex: About, Contact, Navbars, Footers, etc). Users can select these templates, mix and match with other templates, customize them, and can publish either on a Free Subdomain or any Custom Domain of the user's choice.

I spent a good amount of time on this landing page - perfecting the copy, making sure the colors are good, and the overall flow is smooth. But I still can't decide if it's enough.

Would love any suggestions/feedback/improvements on this website.

Thanks in advance!

Is the Landing Page understandable?
  1. No, need more content
  2. Too much content
  3. Yes, it does the job
  1. 2

    Seems like a good effort! I didn't make it through the whole thing, but just collected a couple of thoughts that might help.

    This seems like a fairly direct competitor to carrd and others. Sometimes, when you're the new guy, calling out the big guy can be good. Maybe mentioned a specific problem they have that you solve can be helpful. I have no idea if this is true, but something like:

    "Frustrated that you can't move content around on Carrd easily? We've got you covered, simply drag and drop components wherever you need them!"

    Minor Editing Suggestions:

    • Tighten up language:

    Create & Launch your website in minutes. No coding and design knowledge required.

    could be:

    Create and launch your website in minutes, no coding or design required.

    • Remove unnecessary prose:

    A brief explanation of how Launchweb works & how you can create websites in under 30 minutes. No code required.

    could be

    Create websites in under 30 minutes. No code required.

    Last thought:
    The carousel feels a little lightweight and not quite to the level of other parts of your site. For a website builder, I think everything on the landing page needs to be dialed in perfectly. You might want to consider dropping the carousel for now or working on dialing it in a little more. For me the arrows, feel a little off design-wise and the first time I clicked through it the headings jumped around from top to bottom.

    Good luck!

    1. 1

      Awesome! Thanks a lot for the solid feedback. Appreciate it :)

  2. 1

    I recently signup and try to create a free subdomain website and now it is showing
    Your subscription has expired. Why????

    Btw Your landing page is good and understandable.

    1. 1

      Hey @nuovoteam - Thanks for signing up. It was a small issue with Signup which has now been fixed. Also emailed you the same! Please try it out when you are. Would love your feedback.

      Also thanks for taking the time to checkout the landing page! :)

      1. 2

        Most welcome @syedzohaib, I will share my views soon.

        Can you also help me to review our product and site too https://nuovoteam.com/

        NuovoTeam is a Push-to-Talk (PTT) and all-in-one employee productivity suite that facilitates employee productivity tracking, communication and collaboration across your workforce with its distinctive features.

        With NuovoTeam you can

        1. Communicate with your team via the lightning-fast Push-to-Talk (PTT) feature
        2. Set up a single platform for VOIP calls, chats, audio & video calls, file exchange etc,
        3. Have a unified contact management system for manual or bulk contact uploads
        4. Track employee productivity by monitoring location, tasks & real-time clock in/out
        5. Enhanced Monitoring and Reporting with Insights like work hours, role-based access
        1. 1

          Wow, this is super cool! Your landing page looks really amazing. Love the images and the color palette used. It's pretty easy to understand too!

          I would say your landing page does the job really well :)

          1. 1

            Thank you, If possible must check the user/admin dashboard and give us valuable feedback.

            to access dashboard :

            1. First signup: https://nuovoteam.com/signup
            2. Confirm and log in

            Thank you in advance

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