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Feedback on my landing page and website style

I'd love the groups' help please on how my landing page and general styling looks.

This is my second site using Carrd and love how easy they make it - I'm an experienced developer but when it comes to design I definitely need input ;-)

https://www.earlyventure.report

Hopefully the text on the page says it all, but please ask if you need any clarification on what I am trying to offer and whether the UI supports this.

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    the value is right there on the main page. Can you remove all the paragraphs and concise it to 2/3 bullet points?

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      Wow thankyou.

      So next to each image just have 2 or 3 bullet points?

      And the FAQS are too much text also?

      And how are the dark pages?

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        FAQ & color scheme are okay. but text next to every strip is too much. I'm an early venture and would probably be your ICP, but I wouldn't read every strip the way it is right now. That's just my preference.

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          Can you confirm what you mean by ‘strip’? And ICP?

          I will then make some changes in the morning. Thanks again.

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            ICP: ideal customer profile
            Strip: picture with text

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        FAQ & color scheme are okay. but text next to every strip is too much. I'm an early venture and would probably be your ICP, but I wouldn't read every strip the way it is right now. That's just my preference.

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          hey @prateekrmathur, I've been busy making some tweaks based on your great input and others. also halved the price to make it a deal I hope people can't ignore ;-)

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            Love it! Can you give it for free for now to gain some users, then use those users to give you testimonials and then market those testimonials to your ICP. I'm happy to chat if you want.

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              a very valid point. but the issue is that it can take many months for founders and investors to do their dance and sign a deal.

              So yes, one day I will definitely have loads of testimonials. But until then it is not really possible to base my early marketing on having these.

              Unless you can think of a way to get testimonials from founders before they have got funding? ;-)

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                Testimonials can also be based on the ease of use of the platform or how quickly they were connected to an investor as opposed to the investment itself

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                  very very good point!! ;-)

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