Hi Christian—congrats on getting out a landing page! Here are my first impressions.
It's a bit difficult to scan: too much text, not enough whitespace
The 3D mockup took a pretty long time to load, even on my fast connection. I thought half the page was blank at first.
Type: "stunnig" should be "stunning"
Email input is black text on dark-grey background, so I can't really read what I'm typing
I agree with the other comment about the mockup itself: you should use an actual app! That's how people are going to want to use your product.
Your headline should tell me what I can do, e.g. "Create stunning 3D mockups in seconds." Also I'd recommend losing the exclamation points—you don't want to sound like you're shouting
Try to put yourself in your user's shoes. When they come to your site, they'll probably already have an idea of what they want to use your site for. Try to imagine what kind of screens they would be using, and add an image that you think similar to that. So that it leaves an impression, like "Ah, thats exactly what I want to do".
What do you mean with buzzword/technical words?
Which one is to "buzzy" or to technical?
The loading time will be reduced the next days (hopefully :P).
The reason there are no more examples is, that this landing page is mainly for validating the idea. So, working on the current landing page should consume as less time as possible.
Nice idea!
It is a lot of manual work for you to design such layouts, am I right?
The design of your website works well, only the features in your "What's inside?" section are a bit too small in my opinion.
Definitely!
Let us talk sometime about this again. ;)
Hi Christian—congrats on getting out a landing page! Here are my first impressions.
Hope that's helpful. Good luck!
Love it! Maybe it just lacks the policies in the footer.. Great job Christian! :)
Thank you!
That's true.
I will add it soon. ;)
I like so far, just some minor things you might want to look on:
Hey aaemiro,
thanks for your feedback!
Try to put yourself in your user's shoes. When they come to your site, they'll probably already have an idea of what they want to use your site for. Try to imagine what kind of screens they would be using, and add an image that you think similar to that. So that it leaves an impression, like "Ah, thats exactly what I want to do".
You're right.
Thank you!
Hey @ChristianLutz congrats on launching
Feedback
Is it clear what UpMock does?
Is it clear who UpMock is supposed to help?
Is something important missing?
I'm also re-designing my website for a side project, would be great to hear your feedback. And I think there's room for us to collab :)
Hi Felix,
thank you for your reply.
What do you mean with buzzword/technical words?
Which one is to "buzzy" or to technical?
The loading time will be reduced the next days (hopefully :P).
The reason there are no more examples is, that this landing page is mainly for validating the idea. So, working on the current landing page should consume as less time as possible.
Nice idea!
It is a lot of manual work for you to design such layouts, am I right?
The design of your website works well, only the features in your "What's inside?" section are a bit too small in my opinion.
Definitely!
Let us talk sometime about this again. ;)