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Get your landing page feedback! 💻 5 minute video critiques for everyone 🎉

Hey folks,

I could do with a break from working on Logobly.com - so I'm gonna spend my day helping the community with some feedback on their landing pages.

Okay, here's how it works:

  1. Reply to this post with your landing page URL
  2. I record and post a 5 minute video on how you can improve your landing page

FAQ

What makes you 'The King' of landing page feedback?
I've written a 70 page book on landing pages, plus I've launched and sold a number of successful startups 😉

Why are you doing this?
I'm on lockdown and I've some got time, plus I like doing video feedback on landing pages 😀

I look forward to checking out your landing pages 💪

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    Hey, this is very kind of you. Thanks!

    I'm checking the reviews you posted here and would like to hear what you think of https://kmdr.sh/.

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        Thank you for your time and for bringing a new perspective!✌️

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          Glad I could help, don't forget to check out my book on landing pages here:

          https://gum.co/userbly

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        Thanks!

        We actually decided against the CTA in the header based on advice from Julian Shapiro https://www.julian.com/guide/growth/landing-pages which generally argues against splashing CTA's everywhere.

        Good point about moving the navigation to the side on the switcher.

        Overall you gave us a lot of good ideas! We are now in the process of redoing our landing page :).

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          Glad I could help, don't forget to check out my book on landing pages here:

          https://gum.co/userbly

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      Your website looks amazing! I like how clean everything looks. Great CTA & Social Proof.

      If you have feedback or tips for my site paperless.io ?

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    Thanks for doing this @CraigBarber.
    https://www.jobtrackable.com/
    My target audience is job seekers/freelancers or anyone who is looking for a new job.

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      Your website looks amazing! Your videos work perfectly to explain the job to be done.

      If you have feedback or tips for my site paperless.io ?

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    Just launched the landing page MVP for Jonga. You can check it out at https://jongaproperty.com

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      Great website! Love that it is clean, but maybe you could use different pictures or animations? They didn't not always matched with the text for me.

      If you have feedback or tips for my site paperless.io ?

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        Thanks for the feedback! Really appreciate it. Everything you mentioned is super actionable :)

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          Glad I could help, don't forget to check out my book on landing pages here:

          https://gum.co/userbly

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    I'd love if you can check it out. I notice this thread blowing up so if you are too busy totally understand
    https://fullreign.com/

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        Hey Craig! Thanks a lot!

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          Glad I could help, don't forget to check out my book on landing pages here:

          https://gum.co/userbly

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    Here's what I've been working on https://www.octobook.io/. I'd love any feedback on it so I can perfect it before launch :) thanks for taking the time to do this!

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        Thanks again, this is amazing!
        There's nothing you mentioned that I don't agree with. It really helps having a fresh set of eyes to find things like that! I'll make the changes during the next release.

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          Glad I could help, don't forget to check out my book on landing pages here:

          https://gum.co/userbly

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    I hope I am not too late. We would love to hear feedback for our website paperless.io

    What is Paperless: Paperless helps you to create, customize and send documents to get them filled and signed in no time.
    Our Mission is to enable businesses to transition to frictionless e-signature and document workflows. For a paperless world with peace of mind.

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    Hello, i am still waiting reviews for shootmyjourney.com

    Thanks in advance

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    I did a review from UI & UX side. It's a tough thing to do! Glad you are doing this for people.

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    I don't have a landing page but just wanted to say that I watched a couple of your feedback videos and they are 🔥. Thanks for doing this!

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      Glad I could help, don't forget to check out my book on landing pages here:

      https://gum.co/userbly

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    This is interesting!

    Could you take a peek at my landing page? https://www.boei.help

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    Okay I'm REALLY late, but I just finished my new landing page – https://www.feedbear.com
    If you still have some spare time, I'd be grateful for your feedback. Thanks, Craig!

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    Hey ho, this is really cool what you're doing.

    Here's the landing page for Bee Informed: https://www.beeinformed.app/?s=ih5

  13. 1

    Craig, would love to get your feedback on https://tidbeats.org

    Thanks!

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    Hello Craig, i will be glad if you review my vacation photography page i built with elementor and hello theme. It will be one page website and I finished %90 of it. I will optimize speed later. If you tell me how can i make it better and how can i sort the blocks, columns i will be happy. My website : shootmyjourney.com

    Thanks in advance

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    Hey, love your landing page. The 3D character is cool. Did you make that yourself or outsource it?

    I am iterating https://storycreatorapp.com. Now is a good time to get some feedback. Would love to hear your thoughts.

    Will be making some updates in the next few hours.

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    This would be so crazy!

    Here you go: https://snapsearch.online :)

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    Hey mate, this is pretty cool. Here is mine:
    https://mensfusion.com/

    Any feedback would be appreciated. Thx

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    Hey Craig! : )
    Can you check out this site : https://marvelapp.com/ ?
    It's not mine, but love to know your feedback...
    'Cauz i think it's almost perfect and i am just curious to know what you think about this!

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    Hey, that is awesome! Check out https://tryrant.co/ Would love to hear what you think!

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    It's a flying robot.
    heypixl.com

    Thanks Craig

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    I might be a little late to the party here, but would love even a 30 second review of https://topstonks.com if you have the time. If it's easier to leave a comment, happy to go that way as well!

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    hey Craig - another one for you :) thanks in advance.
    https://www.ga-insights.com

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    Hi Craig,
    Thanks for doing it. Here is our landing page focused on parents: https://CurieDoc.com/

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    would love some feedback on https://getcensus.com 🙏

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    I've been working on https://pointway.app. Would love feedback, thank you so so much!

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        Super helpful, thank you!!

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          Glad I could help, don't forget to check out my book on landing pages here:

          https://gum.co/userbly

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    Hi Craig, I would appreciate your feedback on my new landing page Preze.live

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        Wow! Thank you so much for the feedback. I was struggling with CTAs, so this helps a lot. Thanks Craig :)

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          Glad I could help, don't forget to check out my book on landing pages here:

          https://gum.co/userbly

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    Well, first thanks for doing this. I can see this thread blowing up :)

    Here is what we working on https://www.horizontech.dev/

    Certainly, it's a WIP. So getting your will help us in designing the next things.

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        Thanks a lot, Craig. We will certainly look into those suggestions.

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          Glad I could help, don't forget to check out my book on landing pages here:

          https://gum.co/userbly

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    Although I'm sort of late I'll submit it though: https://talktroop.com

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    Thank you for the offer.

    Here is my landing page: https://groupleads.net

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    You're the man Craig, thanks so much! https://vay.studio/

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        Wow! Great feedback. Everything that you've said makes perfect sense.

        Thanks a lot, mate!

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          Glad I could help, don't forget to check out my book on landing pages here:

          https://gum.co/userbly

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    Would love feedback on 2 projects:

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        Thanks @CraigBarber! That was great feedback and we decided to make most of the suggested changes. Feel free to checkout the sites again (no need for a loom feedback in case you don't feel like it :)

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          Just checked out the sites... SO MUCH BETTER! I'm sure you'll get better results now : ) Good job - it's all about testing and iteration : )

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    Thanks for doing this again Craig!

    I've just launched a rework of https://lakebed.io and would greatly appreciate your feedback. Only if you have time though, no stress.

    Thanks.

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    Hey @CraigBarber,

    Thank you so much for doing it. I am deploying the new landing page for https://www.colorsandfonts.com next week.
    The redesign:

    I would love to get some valuable feedback.

    Thank you so much.

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      Hey @Michael_Andreuzza what's up mate : ) I checked out your sites, here's some thoughts:

      https://www.loom.com/share/0de2e95402674ef3a6ddff14078f4d88

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        Damn, Craig, I can't thank you enough. But seriously, thank you.

        I guess I won't deploy next week. I will fix all of that right now. I moved the button yesterday actually, and as it is now I am working on the switch, I have moon hidden on the markup...but I ran out of time today...

        Ok, I guess I have to switch the sidebar to the right...I have been sort of sceptical about it...but now is too many users telling me that.

        I did not saw the typos...thank you for that.

        I was just talking with a fellow IH about the interesting stuff, they are the stories from the newsletter. It needs a different title....Will act on that. thanks a lot!

        I DM you quickly on Twitter about Logobly.

        You can't image how much I appreciate

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    Hi @CraigBarber, thank you so much for doing that! Could you take a look at https://report-abuse.org ?

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      Done! Great job on your landing page - it was tough to give this one feedback : )

      https://www.loom.com/share/218524cf831f4d4c988c5ae30b8406dc

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        I appreciate your comments, helps me stay motivated! Thank you. :)

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          Glad I could help, don't forget to check out my book on landing pages here:

          https://gum.co/userbly

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    Hey @MrCrilly I saw you were looking for some landing page feedback, I checked your site out - here's your video:

    https://www.loom.com/share/4175d33ceefd45758e768687f2355452

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      Alright! First up great work.

      And here's your landing page video feedback : )

      https://www.loom.com/share/49d542c6cfce4d09b1e2d7a167c95504

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        Cool :-) Thanks for the fast answer!

        You're right about the fact that a book picture is missing, would certainly clarify things out, I'll add it, thanks! Will also implement your other guidance.

        About the cone picture confusing you, it's the VLC mediaplayer https://www.videolan.org/ and the book is directly relating to it, which is why I chose to show the logo first and foremost.

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      Your website looks amazing! If you have feedback or tips for my site paperless.io ?

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      One small tip:
      In the pricing section of your landing page, the slider is green on a purple background.
      This might just be me, but that color combination feels awful to look at :(

      The other parts of the website, especially the video tutorials, are quite dope though.

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