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Happy to receive feedback about my new landing page

What do you think about the price chosen for the monthly subscription?
  1. Too expensive
  2. Fair price
  3. Too cheap
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    on that page, under the logo, it says "REGAIN CONTROL OVER YOUR TELEGRAM CHANNEL AND NEVER MISS OUT A SINGLE MESSAGE" - it's missing an "ON" consider editing it to say this "REGAIN CONTROL OVER YOUR TELEGRAM CHANNEL AND NEVER MISS OUT ON A SINGLE MESSAGE" or shorten it to say "REGAIN CONTROL OVER YOUR TELEGRAM CHANNEL AND NEVER MISS A SINGLE MESSAGE" by removing "OUT".

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    Design of the page is clean and beautiful.

    Only thing, I did not like the video. The music is too loud and the video seems to have a lot to read but I feel like it is not telling me much about the product itself. Maybe put less words and better explain the product to the customer, change the music and give examples of the features of the product, also the the transitions should be faster (with less words as mentioned earlier).

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      Thank you for the feedback ♥️

      Yes, I also think that a video showing the practical use of the bot would bring better value.

      You've perfectly identified one of the biggest weaknesses.

      This is me lacking the skills to create a more explanatory video.

      I don't know if there is anything that would help to achieve the goal easily.

      To produce the video, I used renderforest.com, but it's mostly canned presentations, and there's nothing available for my use case.

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    Design looks good!
    I would improve the demo, right now it's just explaining what you've already written on the page, I would like to see an example of how it's used by users.

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      You have perfectly identified one of the weakest key points. This is probably me lacking the skills to mount a more explanatory video, but you're right!
      I would like to create something more effective.
      Thank you for the feedback ♥️

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    Landing pages are really tricky to get right! It's definitely more important to find out how your prospective users are engaging with it and what they think. I actually offer a service that does just that - feel free to have a look and see if it's something you'd be interested in! https://www.earthfound.studio/

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    Just curious to know how did you create your landing page?. For website UI/UX did you approach some designer and then created it from scratch or did you used some online template?

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      I did everything on my own, I sketched the website starting from the content that I wanted to highlight, which problems can be solved by the product, the added values it can bring, and how fast it is to use.

      Then I browsed the templates offered by carrd.co and found the one that was closer to my vision and tweaked that one.

      Because I worked on this part-time, I used an iterative process to implement the changes, and after each improvement I left the ideas for 1 or 2 days to ripen off.

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    I really like it. And I am quite picky with design, but this landing is pleasant to go through.

    Would add an autoplay feature to the embed youtube video, to launch it as soon as the user scrolls by.

    If you dont mind, what kind of cookie popup is it? An app or homemade script?

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      Thanks for the feedback, it gives me an enormous joy.
      I tried many "out of the box" solutions around, but unfortunately most of them hardly work.
      Eventually I ended up with https://www.shift4shop.com/lp/cookie-law-generator/ and adjusted the colors and a few other things. The integration worked smoothly with carrd.co as well and the end result is pretty spiffy.
      I didn't want anything too flashy, but just a nice popup with a similar UI.

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    Lo e the colors and how everything looks good in mobile! Also I think it os very straight foward to what the product does.
    I don't use telegram so I'll skip the price question.

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      Thank you for the kind words, I really appreciate it.
      I work as a mobile app developer, so that was my main expertise 😃.

      I have to admit though, carrd.co has done a great job optimizing almost everything for mobile since the first iteration.
      I only tweaked a few things to my personal taste.

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    try out voiceform.com to get qualitative feedback at scale!

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      Never heard of them. I'll give it a look, thanks.

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