How did I improve my ‘Business Email’ writing skills

Hey Rohit

Excellent article. Valuable insights.

Thanks

Few places for improvement I felt -

1. Use shorter sentences.

Break 1 long sentence down into 2 short sentences.

A simple trick I use is - I try to speak out each sentence.

And if I feel like I am running out of breath before finishing a sentence, then I break it down.

2. Use shorter paragraphs.

Have many 1 sentence paragraphs, helps the reader transition down the article.

No paras should have more than 3 sentences.

3. The hook should be short and powerful.

This post starts with a 4 sentence paragraph that's hard to read.

The goal is to write 1 or 2 short sentences that suck the reader in.

Hope this helps.

Ignore everything I said if your readers are enjoying it. Nobody knows anything better than the reader haha...

Also, you can write a follow-up article where you can compare practical examples of bad and good business emails.

Same purpose, same context, one is a poor email, and the other is good, and you break down why. I think it will be fun.

Cheers