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This is a follow up to this post.
Improvements:
- Removed the weak first benefit, elaborated on the two other ones
- App screenshot -> demo video (using plyr.io)
- Explained how its different from the competition
- Tried to minimize confusion
- Used hemingwayapp.com to simplify sentence structure
- Condensed the layout a bit to show more content above the fold
- Removed confusing empty hamburger menu on mobile
Let me know what you think!
Let's go Philipp 🎉! You should be proud, your landing page looks great 🎉.
The thing I like the most is how you anticipate the awkward question, "Why bother with yet another note-taking app?" and answer it confidently and concisely. As someone unfamiliar with spaced repetition, I am not immediately convinced about the benefits, which is okay. I was interested enough to watch the video and learn more.
I was pleased I could pause the video and start from the beginning in Chrome because it auto-played I was reading. When I watched the video, I found it hard to imagine a successful outcome, so I clicked away.
Here is my advice:
Thanks a lot for the valuable feedback! I feel like spaced repetition is kind of a buzzword I used to trigger the target audience. However, I might be wrong in the sense that the target audience could be exactly the opposite and doesn't know it. I get it though, spaced repetition is the feature and the benefit isn't clear enough.