I would love help with my Landing page! 🤷‍♂️

by EliotC

Hey IHs,

I've just launched a Side-project trying to help Creators find their team.

I've published my landing page early this week and would love any feedback to clarify the proposition. Thaaaaaanks!

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on April 16, 2021

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On a mobile there is a lot of space at the top, if you move all up you will get more content above the fold. This will help your SEO especially for the up and coming Google update in May.
I would briefly add how it works as soon as you can on the page, you only have their attention for a short time, make it count.

StuCole

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  Good advice, I haven't noticed the space at the top! 😎
  
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- The gradients are too exaggerated IMHO remind me of WordArt from the '90s
- The page copy feels super generic, the only two specific things are "creator" and "split costs with other creators" (paraphrased)
  Other than that, it feels like just any 3rd party hiring agency/todo or whatnot
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DeletedUser

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  Thanks for this. It's insanely valuable! We will try to work on the copywriting and made the changes, such as the hover state on the cards. Again thank you, you're help is very much appreciated! 💪
  
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  Well Written !!
  
  iamabhinash
  
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