Is my copy clear of what the app does?
Hi.
I'm from Sweden so English is not my main language. Would love to get your feedback on the copy of the landing page of a new tool that I've built.
Is it clear what this app does? How could I make the copy better? My buyer persona is a website agency doing client work on a project basis.
Thanks a lot!
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Hi Marcus 👋, I have some feedback, I'm from México so maybe there are some error with my english too...
I think the phrase "Let clients submit feedback using screenshots and screen recordings on your next web project." is like "YOU have to allow them and give them permission for doing that", maybe something like "Empower your clients... to submit feedback using screenshots and screen recordings on your next web project"
I'm not 100% sure, but "Send site to your client" could be "Send THE site/url/link to your client"
Love the design and the colors btw!
Thanks a lot for your feedback! I agree that it should be empower or enable or something like that instead. Great catch 👍🏻.
A part from the spelling, did you find it clear what the product does just from the landing page?
Yea, it's pretty clear, what I understood is: it is a tool which you can set as a script to any site, then if you share the link/url for that site, the client can use your tool to provide feedback to you.
I have one curious question, so if you set it as a script, does anyone accessing the site could potentially use your too? or how do you know the client is the one using it and not anyone else?
Thanks a lot. Yes that’s correct. Basically this is for web agencies or freelancers that work with clients.
You’re right that now if you send the site to someone with the script installer anyone can leave feedback. The reason why is because the people using this site should not be on production sites right now. This is more of the initial review process of a new site.
However I’m about to build a feature where the tool would only load if you send the site with a query string like example.com?feedbucket=abdhdj7374 kind of thing. That way you send that link to people you want giving feedback and other people browsing to the site will not get the tool loaded.
What do you think of that? 😊
Again, thanks a lot for your time.