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Is my messaging clear for Sparrow?

I won't tell you much about what we do because I don't want to bias your opinion. Please be as descriptive as you can be in your response and as always - I APPRECIATE YOU for doing this.

Sparrow - 10x your revenue
https://sparrowstartup.com/

Oh, and if you're really into what we're doing, I'm hosting a super brief 3-question survey to help us define our offering better. Here's the link! <3

https://form.typeform.com/to/Q8X8sBXB

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    Other than issues with design (looks outdated) and colors (hurts my eyes) used...
    Who are you advisors?
    How much does it cost?
    What happens if I don't like the advice given (or I don't find it useful)?

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      1. Advisors - Yeah, I should probably add some of their faces on the landing page.
      2. Cost - It'll depend on the advisor being booked, so I didn't list it anywhere.
      3. Bad service - I understand the thinking behind this, I just don't want to write anything in relation to it.

      What're your thoughts on (2) and (3), @orliesaurus.

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        (2) - Give range based on advisor category
        for ex:
        Really senior advisor in tech - $200/hr
        Really young advisor in tech $100/hr
        hence $100-200 range

        etc etc for all verticals

        (3) If you don't offer a money back guarantee, at least offer an anonymous rating for advisee to rate advisors and vice-versa - then kick out repeat offending troublemakers

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          (2) Why is listing the range important? None of the similar companies in this space, list a $$$/hour range on any of their landing pages.

          (3) Agreed, on the roadmap. Thank you!

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            I used Clarity.FM in the past and it was very clear the pricing.

            All your competitors? Name a few I am curious now...

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    How is this different from advisory cloud?

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      Hi @prateekrmathur, thanks for your comment. Ad. Cloud is for people to join advisory boards. My website / project is a completely different service - was this not clear from what you saw on the landing page, at all?

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        I thought it was similar.

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          Hmm, perhaps because of the use of the word "advisor" on our website.

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