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Just Updated My Landing Page On YourHomeworkPlanner.com Thoughts?

by Andrew Garber

Hi Guys, I just built a new landing page for yourhomeworkplanner.com, if you could drop me some feedback on it that would be awesome.

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 on February 14, 2020
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    Tried to go mobile- cant read anything. Why dont you try any existing frames for it? Now it looks like beta of google in 2005.

    Tiltforindie
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    4 years ago
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    Hi @Garberchov,

    Please don't mind my critical feedback.

    • Currently, the web page gives the feeling of 2 presentation slides

    How you could improve:

    • Break down the two sections to many more (7 - 8 sections), having no more than 3 lines per section.

    • Check out this website: https://www.khanacademy.org/ and see how they have broken the story down piece by piece and provided an image for each section, which makes the user spend more time and take notice.

    Let me know once you have updated it.

    All the best.

    falcon007
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    4 years ago
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