I hate hate hate the super salesy letters, but I figure I do need a little bit of a letter format to explain what I’m building.
The target audience for this page is artists. I’m looking for a few initial users. I am going to do some initial direct outreach to artists I know via instagram, but I am also considering doing some reddit ads in artist groups pointing here:
https://www.artwerks.io/artists/welcome
Any feedback, either on the copy or the page itself, would be very welcome! Thanks in advance!
To me it looks more like those messages that say „sorry, but we’re closing down”. The main text lacks contrast, line height is too small, it’s lacking this pre-launch landing page energetic vibe.
Fortunately there’s a lot of „coming soon” pages to take inspiration from. Maybe you’ll find something here https://blog.wishpond.com/post/115675436858/coming-soon-page
Good luck with your project!
For my humble opinion it's completely without identity, I think so that probably the use of different colors or the use of some specific illustration could really improve the effectiveness of the landing page.