Hello!
I just released a new landing page for my newsletter platform https://postheat.com, and I'm looking for some help with feedback for further improvements from the Indie Hacker Community.
Note: The page is best viewed on Desktop, I have not designed the page specifically for mobile devices yet.
Do you understand what the product is from the content visible above the fold? Are you compelled to read further down the page?
Does the copy compel you to test the email design tool, or even sign up for a free trial if you were in the market for an email design tool?
Any other issues or feedback is greatly appreciated!
Thanks,
Looks beautiful! Here's my feedback in video format: https://www.loom.com/share/cc909addc72b4f61a8aef7482f6c09b1
Big things were:
Headline clarity
Free trial vs freemium? Which is it?
Are there automations (eg. Welcome emails)?
Wow, thank you soo much for taking such an in-depth look at my landing page!
You brought up some really good points. I definitely need to improve clarification around the pricing. My initial thoughts were to kind of show a series of "free" - "free" - "free" when describing the features to try and improve my conversion rate, but after watching your review, I'm realizing that this is just more confusing, and a simpler approach is probably better.
I didn't even think about the phrase "mailing list platform" being too generic, but you also made a really good point that if you are already familiar with these types of services and "mailing list platform" is confusing or unclear, then it's not going to be useful to existing customers in the market or new customers in the market. I'll try a few different headlines that are more specific, and try to use more concrete and existing industry phrases.
Thanks Again!
You're very welcome! Glad I could help :)
Side note, would you mind taking a quick moment to vote on this poll? I'm looking to create more content to help startup founders :) https://www.indiehackers.com/post/do-you-have-questions-about-writing-your-website-ea952ffbf6
That's a very colourful site! Here's a short list of some things I spotted on a first pass:
Thanks for the feedback!