Hi! How are you? I published my landing page 2 weeks ago and received some great feedback from you to improve it. Thanks for that.
I improved and changed it to the point it is almost a new website. What do you think about it now? Is it easy to understand what the start-up is doing?
Any new feedback would be very appreciated!
Thank you!
I don't get it at all. What are you actually offering?
I kind of guessed it after checking your "invest" page - you build houses (cabins?) in some fab locations and rent them out to people to work from.
By the way, the "invest" offer may run foul with regulators. Is it a public offer? There is no disclaimer.
Statements like "XYZ is starting in early 2022" have a lot more weight if you can back them up with some creds of who's behind it.
My first impression of the landing page was "this is not serious", but after checking your creds on "invest" page I was less skeptical.
Headings don't normally have a full-stop. "One high standard." -> "One high standard"
Speaking of which, your website sets that standard.
What would be the difference between a cabin built for a remote worker and an airbnb cabin? I used to use AirBnB for that before Covid for that. It was a mixed bag. I would totally use a specialized service where I can rent a place to focus on work.
So what would be important for your target customer? Connectivity? Peace and quiet? Access to amenities? Is it a high-end or budget offer? Maybe talk about that first.
The more I think about it the more I like the idea. You just need to explain it a bit better.
If the above was of value I'd appreciate your impression of stackmuncher.com, specially it's homepage and the developer search. Ignore the pages linked from the top.
Partricio, I believe it's a pretty nice idea to enable remote workers to work through different places. Speaking of the website, as opposed to text and images if there was an illustration of a character with a laptop working through different locations in a month; moving in and out of houses, meeting new people, and so on. That would be more impactful I believe. An illustration will give your website a bit of character. For instance, check out the illustration on the landing page of this website https://www.postman.com/
As per the current look and feel of the website, yes I can understand that I can stay at different locations and work but I fail to understand that will there be other remote workers I would be sharing the house with or it is more of a solo thing?
Also, I would get rid of that steel gray color backdrop and would just have everything against the white background.
Let me know if you need further feedback. I will be happy to help.
Hi TechPackets, thank you for reviewing the website and the great feedback.
It is not a shared experience, only for you and your family or whoever you go with. I'll make sure to clarify that.
And about the illustration part, I'll give it a try as well! I like the example you sent.
Thanks again!