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Launcehd our Landing Page

hello indie hackers,

We have just launched our landing page, we are looking for feedback on our content and product.

https://helloyomo.com/

A simple tool for reporting bugs and collecting visual feedback. Create and integrate your projects with Jira, Slack, Trello. With our browser plugin screenshot, annotate and report the bugs or feedback.

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    The video is a good idea, but i couldn't follow what was going on. I think you need more directional/instructional input/commentary. You also need to slow it down where there is text as its impossible to read and digest.

    Change the main font to something simpler. It really spoils the design and makes it look cheap.

    Lose the "s" off "Feedbacks". It should be "Feedback".

    I actually think what you wrote above here, works quite well...

    "A simple tool for reporting bugs and collecting visual feedback."

    But with a little work, you could have something - roughly like...

    "X is a browser plugin that integrates with Jira, Slack & Trello to reports bugs with visual feedback using screenshots and annotations."

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      Also definitely lose the shadow on the font.

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