From a writing standpoint it doesn't draw the reader in. The teaser is not enough. Simply put it doesn't tease me much. Do you have an ideal reader? Android devs? Prospective customers? Amyone?
I do not seek for seasoned audience nor technical. Ideal audience is whoever thought about starting "app business", but haven't done it yet or doesn't even know where to start.
Potential customers? Sure, always.
But the main reason for me is to just go public and have any place to show off my potential work and be serious about it.
I dont know. There is so much competition in writing these days. Maybe humor? Maybe some insight or behind the curtain stuff non-technical founders dont know about. It's hard to say what it's missing, I can just say that I was not pulled in too much. I am not trying to be harsh, I am just responding.
I love this! I’ve always been thinking of doing the same thing for when I started learning React. I guess I’ll just read yours instead :P
Can’t wait for more!
Brayden, thank you, I appreciate it!
From a writing standpoint it doesn't draw the reader in. The teaser is not enough. Simply put it doesn't tease me much. Do you have an ideal reader? Android devs? Prospective customers? Amyone?
Thanks!
What would you change?
I do not seek for seasoned audience nor technical. Ideal audience is whoever thought about starting "app business", but haven't done it yet or doesn't even know where to start.
Potential customers? Sure, always.
But the main reason for me is to just go public and have any place to show off my potential work and be serious about it.
I dont know. There is so much competition in writing these days. Maybe humor? Maybe some insight or behind the curtain stuff non-technical founders dont know about. It's hard to say what it's missing, I can just say that I was not pulled in too much. I am not trying to be harsh, I am just responding.
I know what you mean. I will put more "real" content into the next post. I explain myself that you have to start somehow ;)