Hey Everyone!
After joining this site 2 months ago, I've come to learn so much about building and growing a side project and now I want to give something back 🙏
👇 Drop your sites below & with a Loom, I'll cover:
I love reading through website copy so pretty excited to start!
All I ask in return is that you check out my side project that I launched last week: Fruitbowl.io 🍉
Cheers 😃
Hey @jptwothree05, great engagement with your post! Taking a look at your landing page, my feedback is:
Would love your feedback on my landing page, it is no where near perfect. There might be some ideas for you too!
https://warroomops.com/
Thank you so much for the feedback! I will be sure to edit the text to make it more readable :)
https://www.loom.com/share/8190de6fb75e488cb906e460fcb5ad3b
Hey @jptwothree05 thanks for doing this!
It'd be awesome if you could take a look at the landing page that I'm currently working on and let me know your thoughts: http://relaax.io
Taking a look FruitBowl I can immediately understand what you're offering and who you're offering it too (I could instantly understand that it didn't apply to me 😅)
The one feedback that I can give is in line with what @johncb said. I think that your prices are too low. I think if you're aiming to solve problems that agencies are having (and it sounds like a large, hard to scale problem for them) then your pricing should reflect that
https://www.loom.com/share/9901f434fec847efa3a889a79ef9d843
Thank you for taking the time to look at my site.
I'll definitely check out relaax.io and give you video feedback :D
Hey, feel free to checkout my app store landing page, it could use some work: https://apps.apple.com/us/app/bold-cbt-journal/id1448434338
I am looking at FruitBowl now :)
Your website looks great, I understood what you're offering instantly. I only have some small nitpick suggestions:
Hope this helps!
https://www.loom.com/share/b7dc7afe3b514c9c8c1044a1f01a0d19
As soon as Ive recorded my thoughts, i'll post the loom link on here 👍
Thank you for that feedback, I really appreciate it :)
I've corrected the "get started" link since and I'll have another look at my pricing.
Just looking at Bold now, gotta say your screenshots are very eye catching!
Hi @jptwothree05, love this idea. Would love to get your feedback on www.tendrevolution.com
Looking at Fruit Bowl, I'd suggest the following:
It would be great to get your feedback on our site.
Thanks!
Hey mate thank you for that feedback, I really think the headline needed some work!
Ive made some changes so feel free to have another look
Here are my thoughts on Tend Revolution: https://www.loom.com/share/d07ea6c3658044c7be0da11c69e1c60c
veriscript.io please suggest
Hey would be interested in your feedback on www.westryve.com
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Hey! Here's some feedback:
• I'm not sure the hero graphic conveys your product. If you add a product / better visual representation, I think that would help to convey your message.
• Whitespace is great - everything is clear and readable.
• The bright green logo against the white background has a poor contrast making it harder to read - poor for accessibility and it clashes a bit against the purple.
• Quite a lot of text in the 'Why Fruitbowl?' section - may be good to halve this.
• The illustrations further down the page would benefit from custom images in my opinion.
• Overall it's not a bad page at all, some minor tweaks and it would be kick-ass. Replacing your illustrations with better visual aids would be the most important thing in my opinion. Good job so far!
Be gentle: Bolt - updated UI elements coming soon, but layout will remain the same. I've looked at the copy so long that I'm not sure if it even makes sense any more!
Awesome product man, hard to find improvements:
Here are my thoughts : https://www.loom.com/share/d36459fb08e04b81af0a9f79a05cf228
Thank you, much appreciated. Always great to have another set of eyes on a design. Best of luck to you!
Hi @jptwothree05, this is a super generous offer and I'd love to get your feedback if you still have time -- my new project is at https://slideswith.com
Thoughts on Fruitbowl: I'd love to see a product demo or at least some screenshots before going through the registration page. I'm always interested in knowing exactly what the interface looks like before jumping through too many hoops.
My second suggestion is to make fewer of the registration fields required -- I tried to sign up but then got stuck when I couldn't find the logo I wanted quickly enough and the form wouldn't let me continue without it. I'll come back later and give it another shot when I have a bit more time :)
Thanks again, best of luck!
Hey man, thank you for that feedback it's highly appreciated!
I've added screenshots to the site so check them out and see what you think.
Also, I want to thank you for signing up to Fruitbowl - let me know if everything goes smoothly with the rest of your onboarding 😅
Here are my thoughts on Slides with Friends: https://www.loom.com/share/8f12e58ade7b44438bcbc8bdb1120d4d
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Hey,
Some feedback for FruitBowl:
Here is my landing page if you still have time to look over it: https://www.usertrack.net/
hey thank you for the detailed feedback, its really helpful! Regarding the contract and invoice, the client can digitally sign the contract with fruitbowl after they've paid the invoice. I've updated the images on my site, I think its clearer to understand now.
Here is your video, hope it helps!
https://www.loom.com/share/340a1471b6fc4577850b7740d21e5b7b
Ok, I understand fruitbowl more now. I think my push-back (why I currently don't consider using it) is that I already use an invoicing platform, and I only do a few freelancer projects per year, so I might not be in your target audience. If I have to sign or send a contract I would still use a simple PDF, because I'm used do doing so and I don't find it that time-consuming. The main question is if bundling the contract signing with invoice generation is enough to justify a new subscription.
Thanks a lot for the feedback, really good points! I should definitely move those benefits to the pricing page, as the pricing page is the most-viewed page (people first click to go the pricing before they even read what the product is about, this is why I also suggested that you should add a pricing link to your header).
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Thank you for the feedback!
As far as I've seen from the session recordings, most clients don't read the testimonials at all. The usual user journey is: Home page (read hero text) -> Pricing -> Back to homepage to view features/images, but just scroll over testimonials.
I would not add a "click to see testimonials" button as that's an extra decision the user would have to take and an extra call-to-action link that would take away from the main CTA.
The problem with the testimonials, is that I don't know who those users are, where are they using the product, or what's their real name. The customers are mostly anonymous, apart from their username or email address sometimes. I just know that customers, whoever they are, are loving the product and wrote those nice reviews without me asking for them in any way.
https://thisweekin2020.com/
Rip it apart!
https://www.loom.com/share/bcb379d8f4a7401890b88cf66143ecb6
This is awesome feedback! I can't use your product (I'm not the audience), but if I meet anyone who needs it, I'll send them your way. Also followed.
Thank you man i really appreciate that :D
I will try lol!
Ooh, I need some help here - in an effort to improve my landing page, I've inadvertently made it a lot less clear and am getting a lot fewer conversions.
I'm already working on changes but would love your thoughts - https://verifiablee.com
Part of the challenge is that it's a little tricky to explain - it demos well, but I've had a lot of people comment that they don't get it until they see the demo. I tried to capture that in the video, but doesn't seem to be working.
Sure no worries will check it out!
Hey, I checked out your landing page. Looks good, had to think for a while what to improve. Some ideas:
My project: https://topicplay.com
Hope this helps!
https://www.loom.com/share/de4d0f15073343ceb3aa5af38cc9f3a9
Perfect, thanks!
Wow thats really useful feedback that you've given, thank you!
I'll be sure to check out Topic Play :)
Hey thanks for doing this.
Can you check out www.gofloaters.com
https://www.loom.com/share/b92a649051af4a6dbc4b3c226cd8ca2a
thanks a lot. cheers
Sure! it's on my list 😅
Great idea - will upvote fruitbowl - please check out www.techprefab.com and let me knwo your thoughts... cheers - robert
Thank you man, it's on my list!
Great looking forward
Feedback:
Here's my page: Tag My Knowledge
Hey man thank you for that feedback, I've fixed the video aspect and am thinking about a 7 day trial.
Here are my thoughts on TMK: https://www.loom.com/share/46eff3ff653d42e7a797bb32ea2212a9
Hope they come in useful!
I ended up creating a Medium article (friend link) for the device embed code. It's currently paywalled because I wanted to see how that affects views, but the link isn't. Maybe you can get some value out of it.
Oh, one more thing:
After checking out your page again, I noticed that the video player doesn't pop out when you scroll down. I think with plyr you'd get that feature. Btw I'm not paid by them, they're open source & 100% free. I just love them so much
Thanks a lot, great feedback!
Not sure if I want to change the headline just yet since the focus is on knowledge, but I will definitely try this out once I get to A/B testing. Agree to everything else, thanks again!
Also, if you want the code to display the video inside a device frame, I can send it to you if you want. It's pretty simple
Hello @jptwothree05 I appreciate what you are doing. Could I get your feedback on https://www.lumiate.co?
Tell me something about mine here: https://laptopsguide.com
It is new, and in a very competitive niche. So i will be wiling to take any criticism positively that will help me compete favourably.
http://miracle-nutrition.com/
Hey @jptwothree05, I would really appreciate your feedback! Thank you for doing this :)
https://www.bottlrx.com/
devondemand.co please suggest
That's amazing!
if you are still taking applicants: https://daily-dev-tips.com/
About fruitbowl:
How does it work seems so generic to me.
I would love to hear your feedback for https://aspirethemes.com/. Thanks so much!
Hey @jptwothree05 just checked out Fruitbowl.io, first of all I love your minimal approach to the design of the UI, one gets what you are offering immediately on visiting your site.
Also love how you've explained with an image to show how it all works as one scrolls down, before getting to the pricing one is aware of what you are offering in detail.
So here is my landing page, any feedback will be greatly appreciated: https://chatifai.datawisepro.com/
Cheers @jptwothree05. Here is my landing page: https://quickchatbot.versoly.page.
Thank you for that advice, I've added in videos & gifs since, and removed a lot of the words!
Here are some ideas on BotMocha: https://www.loom.com/share/0ae9e8966bf34280af14767ac4b81203
Hey there! Would love your thoughts on https://midnight.pub
Thank you, really appreciate this.
Amazing engagement, congrats mate!
I'd love if you could have a chance to review https://remoteworkly.co 🙂
On point with your website:
I run an agency, but not fully clear on admin hassle you mention in the sub-header
I would clean out copy a little further. Example
"Fruitbowl.io combines both invoicing and contract signing into one step so that you can go from sales call to onboarded client in the smoothest way possible. No more hopping between different platforms."
to
"Avoid losing your clients by combining invoicing and contracts in a one seamless step on a single platform.
Hit them with the fear of loss, then offer solution and unique value prop. Use the words "you, your and we"
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Also I would reduce alot of the words used, like code, the fewer the words the better the outcome
"First, you want to create your invoice with all of the services that you're offering. You can also set the billing schedule for the invoice if you want it to be recurring or just once off. Either way, the client pays straight into your Stripe account."
to
"Create an invoice for all your billables. Set up a schedule or make it recurring, whatever works. No more chasing, we'll do it for you"
https://marketingexamples.com/copywriting/conversational is a great place for such examples.
Hope this helps!
Hey mate thank you for those adjustments, they came in handy when updating my site: it's very different now so have a look when you get a chance :)
Here are my thoughts on RW: https://www.loom.com/share/a093e95b6d4d4ebe90b3906a8c28c9a7
Interfaces.co
Feedback for Fruitbowl.io:
Offering, features and pricing is clearly conveyed.
Two questions:
I'm sharing the current landing page of Sociomata for which we have opened the waitlist. It is not a live product as of now but people are joining the waitlist to get early access. I want to know if the offering is clearly conveyed or not? sociomata.com
I will be happy to hear back from you.
Thank you for the feedback I think the addition of a pricing page would help
Here are my thoughts on SocioMata: https://www.loom.com/share/9871f52612f04e8985714dc1a7000ed8
Thank you for the very detailed and specific feedback on the copy. I look forward to improving.
I don't have a digital agency, but I like how clean your landing page is and that the prices are extremely easy to find.
Here's my latest project: https://www.boethi.us/
I love the drawings on the page. However, I'm not a big fan of the gigantic sticky header. On a resolution that's not very tall, it takes a lot of space.
One thing that I like to see on websites is who's behind it and why would I trust you with my credit card? I couldn't find that info on yours.
On the mission statement: "Our mission is to accelerate the workflow of agency owners by combining many of their tasks.". I'm probably not the target audience but I don't understand why combining tasks is helpful. Is it less work?
If you're still doing reviews, my website is https://ideaworkbench.io
Hey thank you for that feedback, I've edited the site a lot since so feel free to check it out!
My thoughts on ideaworkbench: https://www.loom.com/share/654142ce0f624e958bb3f0ce09feb96d
One point about the new design: since parts of it pop up as you scroll, does that affect SEO? It the site crawled properly by search engines?
That's great feedback, I really appreciate it! Thanks Javahn!
Hi! Would love to hear your feedback on https://dienox.com ! 🙌
Fruitbowl looks great! Some feedback:
Obviously the above is my opinion and not facts. Good luck and would love to hear your feedback! :)
Hey man thank you for that feedback , Its highly appreciated.
Here are my thoughts on Dineox, hope they come in useful!
https://www.loom.com/share/79204d19be734ad4ab38f4699d0a21de
Thank you a lot! Very valuable feedback, highly appreciated!
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Hi! Thanks for letting me know, I guess something went wrong with the DNS since only people from the US/Canada where not able to reach the website. Could you try again? It should be resolved. Thanks for letting me know!!
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Thank you! 🙌
If you have the bandwith I would love your 2 cents.
https://storycreatorapp.com
Uploaded them here man: https://www.loom.com/share/ecf308d939ac4864bc8d55e2314531e7
I'm dyslexic AF so I'm scared to share this! https://howtoproduct.co/#define-design-validate
No sweat man!
Here are my thoughts: https://www.loom.com/share/376687168a434ce28fc4bfb48ef92d43
Hey, still developing our product but would love a critique of our current website: www.dekked.app.
Thanks! :)
As for Fruitbowl.io, I love the look of the website. Here are some changes I would make:
Hey thank you for that, we will definitley fix those typos asap!
Here is your video, hope it helps!
https://www.loom.com/share/8e8e5fb97c1a4513a78f5a83c24d656e
Thanks--great advice! Much appreciated :)
Site looks very clean, just the idea for you -- you should add the option for $0 / month and take a transaction fee above stripe fee (let's say 5%).
Hey thanks man, I've considered this and will give it another think
This is super much in testing phase. https://cassandr.com/
https://www.loom.com/share/b231ac587b6249c49228ca8e0571613b
Good point. There are 0 predictions at the moment but I plan to contact some prominent twitter users that are known to make predictions, except here they can't delete them if they get them wrong. Cheers, dude!
I'd suggest replacing the illustrations with some product screenshots. Without customer testimonials, I'd at least want to see how the app itself looks. Otherwise, it was clear to me what you offered. Do you have competitors in your space?
My project: Noora (noorahq.com)
Hey thank you for the feedback, Im looking to add in some testomonials. Our main competitior is an app called And.co by Fiverr but they focus on freelancers as apposed to agencies.
Btw, I like your app and the saving it offers against intercom
Video Link: https://www.loom.com/share/5045ce27d8204050bb01283ff8e84d49
Your landing page is impressive @jptwothree05
I'm in the middle of putting up the version 2.0 of my project, would be awesome to hear your feedback!
https://www.loom.com/share/de80a73b063144e38b9ac63fed3b21b6
Hey @jptwothree05 - that's fantastic feedback. It's super helpful for version 2.0. Don't know how to appreciate your time. Would a Twitter mention works :)? Here's mine
Hey @felix12777 , I'm glad you found the feedback useful.
Thank you for that kind offer - i'd really appreciate a twitter mention. Im not on twitter, but feel free to link my site: https://www.fruitbowl.io/
Thanks 😃
Awesome man thank you.
Will definitely have a look!
Fruitbowl very simple and clean landing page, try adding some animations, product screenshot, product tour or a video showing the product. Reduce a the navbar a little when scrolling, play with diferent font for the headers and text.
My product: UpStamps - Feature Flag Management Platform to separate code from different environments and projects.
https://www.loom.com/share/eb3bca62eba749fc9d2d55952356a3bf
Thanks for your time and feedback, considering your statements, very clear and useful.
Thanks you for that feedback, I'm definitely planning on adding screenshots in.
Will check out your UpStamps!
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No problem 👍
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Here is mine: BuildFaster.co - HTML themes made easy as pie.
https://www.loom.com/share/883f0b0dfad148e893c11c3adfadbd1d
Awesome feedback! Thanks so much :)
Thank you for the feedback :) I agree my font is a little hard to read.
Video incoming !
Awesome! 😄
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I would love some feedback on ChromeExtensionKit! I've gone through a couple iterations on the site and copy.
With regards to Fruitbowl, I think the site looks great. I was able to get a good idea of what the product is fairly quickly as well. My only suggestion would be potentially adding screenshots of the actual product so I can get a better idea of what it looks like.
https://www.loom.com/share/2a6eec52acd24a1f97d56ce7260787cd
That's awesome and really helpful! Thanks for taking the time to do that.
Got it thanks!
Will definitely check out your tool
Would love some feedback! we're at www.unstack.com
https://www.loom.com/share/2aa1e025e4974c2083fd732bd3c03501
This is awesome, thanks! We already implemented your feedback. The headline is an A/B test, so going to wait to add your feedback until that finishes running :-)
Sure, will definitely check it out!
Hi! I would love your feedback for https://annotate.tv. Thanks! 🙏
Hi there, Added to the list!
https://www.loom.com/share/73d4f07166484704ace84fb5bb6130fc
thanks for the feedback! It was very useful 👌
thanks for the feedback! it was very useful ok 👌
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Thank you for your feedback, this really helps
My ideas on Geolinkify: https://www.loom.com/share/bb6070614d3d4a0095ef376d907b6c46
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Hey Just updated my site keen to hear your thoughts!
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Hey man its private so i cant see it fyi
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