Landing Page Feedback June 29, 2020

Let me rewrite your landing page headline

Danny Postma @DannyPostma

Hey Indie Hackers,

A headline can literally make - or break - your business.

Bad headlines:

❌ Increases your bounce rate
❌ Lowers your conversion rate
❌ Ruins your email open rate

Let me help you!

Writing a high converting headline is hard. That's why I want to help you out today 🎉

Drop the link to your website and I will give you a few optimized options in return.


I'm launching my new product on Producthunt today, which makes me super hyped. I want to use that energy to give something back to the inspiring Indie Hackers community ❤️

Super stoked to see how this blew up today 😍! I'm working on urgent client work today and tomorrow. I'll respond to everyone's post with the headlines before Thursday (and as many as I can tonight)

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    Hi Danny,

    Here is the link:

    Congrats on the launch. Already trying Headlime. :-)


    1. 1

      Thank you! 🙏🏻

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      1. 1

        Thank you so much! 🙏

  2. 1

    Hi Danny!

    We got a bunch of Ideas from Headlime =) Thanks for making such a great app!!

    dont know if this will get buried, but if you are not too busy, please take a look at it!!

    Thank you!!

  3. 1

    Thanks @DannyPostma Congrats on your launch.

    Would be awesome to hear your advice on Virtual Mojito

  4. 1

    Hey @DannyPostma I really appreciate if you can help me with my website I see that you have something in the way you attract people in your posts (looks like you are genuinely good copy writer and I need your skills!)


  5. 1

    Hey Danny. Here's my website - Waiting for your inputs on my landing page!

  6. 1

    Hey Danny. Really fair play :) Would love to hear your thoughts on homepage! Let's see if you can fully grasp the concept and find the headline that will skyrocket our conversions (it's not an easy task) 🤘🚀🇫🇷

  7. 1

    Hi Danny,

    Thanks for the offer. Curious to see what you think of my landing page. Does it resonate in any way?


  8. 1

    Hey Danny.

    Awesome Offer!

    Here is the landing page ->

    I feel my headline is too convoluted and it might be putting people off.

  9. 1

    awesome idea

    here is my site

    I am getting a new domain name, but this should do for now

  10. 1
  11. 1

    Would be great to hear a feeback for

  12. 1

    @DannyPostma - mad respect.

    Cool product. I'll give it a go.

  13. 1

    I don't have a headline but I have a pun!...

    "Don't give directions, gif directions!"

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  15. 1

    Thanks for doing this for everyone! Would love to see what you spin up:

  16. 1

    Thanks! - HTML themes made easier than ever

  17. 1

    Awesome, is my tool if you want to take a look.

  18. 1

    Oh wow. That is a wonderful offer.

    Here is the landing page -
    To give you some context, I go into more details about why I built here -

    Thanks once again.

  19. 1

    Love Headlime, and also I've shared it to a private community of over 700 health professionals who are trying to promote their business online.

    If you still have time I'd love to see what you think a good headline would be for this page:

    1. 2

      Thank you so much for sharing! 🙏🏻

      Writing Personal Headlines is a skill apart, gave my best shot below :)
      Hi. I'm Maeve Hanan, A Registered Dietitian That Shares No Nonsense Nutrition.

      No-Nonsense, Evidence-based Nutrition From A Registered Dietitian

      No-Nonsense Nutrition, By A Registered Dietitian

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    1. 2

      Super clear headlines already! One way to make it pop a little more if by communicating the Desired Outcome:

      Double Your Revenue With One Click Upsell - Available For Any Platform

      1. 1

        I like that! Thanks!

  20. 1

    I wonder what you can make of 🔥

    1. 1

      I don't think you need any of my help. So on point!!

      (I'm going to check your product out later this week)

      1. 1

        That's awesome to hear Danny, thanks😁

  21. 1

    @DannyPostma I can really use your help. Thanks!
    artistic, animated ecards

    1. 1

      @net2tim Again I'd disadvise using Rab's headline. Super unclear and doesn't communicate what your product is. Here is my take on it:

      Remind Your Family You Love Them

      Send Beautiful Ecards to Your Loved Ones

      Send Ecards To People You Care About

      Say More With An Ecard

      Thousands Of Ecards, Just Seconds Away

      The Ecard Your Loved One Deserves

      1. 1

        Those are great!

        Here are some that we were thinking about.

        Option 1:
        Not your ordinary ecards. Send with confidence.
        Connect Deeply. Your friends and family will thank you for it.

        Option 2:
        Send our Designer Ecards. As much as you like.
        Your friends and family will thank you for it.

        Option 3:
        Not your ordinary ecards.
        Send with confidence. Wow your friends and family.

        Option 4:
        Show that you care with artistic & thoughtful ecards

    2. 1

      "Beautiful Cards for Beautiful People."

      Your history is impressive with the articles in various newspapers and your cards look amazing. If the shape of the headline above works for you then you could play with different adjectives (e.g. Wonderful, Unique, Stylish, Stunning, Amazing). What do you think?

      1. 1

        Thanks for the suggestion

  22. 1

    Awesome, and congrats on the successful launch!

    1. 1

      Your headline is there already 🔥

      Get the email address of anyone or it's free

      Or reframe it a little to:
      Find Anyone's Email Address In Seconds or Get Your Money Back

  23. 1

    I might need your help:

    1. 1

      Get Out Of Your Bubble And Make Informed Conversation

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  24. 1

    Hi Danny,

    Good luck with your new product! Btw, I really like your Inspireframe app, nicely done! I have just launched v1 of my product DataGridXL after spending way too much time on it: Looking for ways to promote it now! :-)

    Btw, I am a friend of Jeroen ( and I lived in Canggu for about 8 months. Strange we never met!

    1. 1

      Awesomeeee! Super stocked you like it. Using it myself all the time too haha.

      Can't believe we haven't met here yet. Let me know when you're back :)

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  25. 1

    If you can change my headline then that will be grateful.


    1. 1

      User Authentication Made Easy For Everyone

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      1. 1

        Good suggestions. Is the "Via URL" not good or misunderstood?

  26. 1

    Our project not a landing page but I tking we couldn't explain our project.Thank you for your help.

    1. 1

      I'd start by removing the many popups and moving elements on your site. Basically unusable as I am now left with a black overlay 😅

    1. 1

      Dude, your headline is on point!! You're making one mistake though.

      The subheadline "Feature flagging is a method by which developers wrap a new feature in an if/then statement to gain more control over its release" is unclear.

      Fix it by writing down the solution. How do you solve mistakingly deploying a feature?

      1. 1

        Thanks for the feedback, yes makes sense is too generic, need to improve. cheers

  27. 1

    I can use some advice on too

    1. 1

      @johnsmith42 I would disadvise you to use Rabs headline. Very unclear what your product us. Too cryptic. Try something like this:

      The Only Interviewing Platform That Respects Your Time

      Prefilter Candidates With One-Way Video Interviewing

      Interviewing Candidates Without Ever Checking Your Agenda

      1. 1

        thank you, very cool ideas

    2. 0

      Imo you have your headline on your page already

      "Hire faster, Hire Better"

      1. 1

        thanks, your response is appreciated.

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    Portabella, looks like your launch has done pretty well!

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      Absolute crazy success haha!
      Honestly, I think your headline is on point already! Communicated clearly what you offer.

      You could reframe it more as a solution like:

      Project Management That Cannot Leak Your Data

      Project Management Tool So Protected, Even We Can't See Your Data.

    1. 1

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    1. 1

      Know Exactly When Your Rails App Is Offline

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  29. 1

    Appreciate your effort and if you find time could you please take a look a

    1. 1

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      1. 1

        Thanks, DannyPostma, loved the headlines and how they sound when I read them. I will probably use them on my landing page. Once again, big thank you!

  30. 1

    nice one !!

    Wicked Templates

    thank you so much for doing this, I keep struggling...

    1. 1

      Happy to help out! Btw, your detail pages don't show the landing page

      Your headlines
      Ready To Use One Page Templates Made For Startups

      The One Page Templates Your Startup Deserves

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      1. 1

        Oh wow !
        Thank you so much Danny! And congrats for the cashing in !

        Btw, your detail pages don't show the landing page

        What do you mean?

        Thank you !

    1. 2

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  31. 1

    ⚠️ This blew up today! I'm working on client work today and tomorrow. I'll respond to everyone's post with the headlines before Thursday (and as many as I can tonight).

  32. 1

    I can definitely use some help with this at

    Thanks a lot and all the best for your product !

    1. 2

      Thank you!
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  33. 1

    Hi Danny,

    Would love your feedback on this.

    I have been thinking about the following "Build Landing pages that Convert"
    "Get higher ROI on your Ad spends" but not too happy.

    We have pretty good conversion rates so far but we are becoming more of a platform and not just a page builder and want to get the messaging across correctly.


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      You're growing quick man, super good to see!
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      1. 1

        Hi Danny,

        Thank you so much for this. Conveys the value and the product :) We are re-designing our website and I will experiment with some of these.


  34. 1

    Congrats on reaching this milestone!

    1. 1

      Cheers man, such a wild ride!!
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      1. 1

        Thank you! Best of luck going forward!

  35. 1

    Hey, congrats on the launch 👌

    Let's see what you come up with:

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      Thanks Kevin! Digging your product a lot. Your headlines:
      Keep Track of Your Work Achievements And Get Promoted Easier

      We Helped Employees Just Like You to Getting Promoted

      Are You Sure Not Keeping Track Of Achievements Is Not Costing You A Promotion?

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  36. 1

    Thank you so much for doing this!

    1. 2

      Any time! 🙏🏻

      We've Got Your Next Freelancer To Grow Your Business!

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      1. 1

        Awesome headlines will update the landing using "When Businesses Need To Grow Their Business, They Call Ourspark"

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    I appreciate your help. Looking forward to your rewrite.

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      There ya go!
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  38. 1 , Upvoted! Good luck on PH!

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  39. 1

    Congrats on the PH launch.
    Here's the link:
    Thanks in advance :)

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      Thank you :)
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  40. 1

    I saw Headlime on PH, looking slick man! Congrats on your launch!

    1. 1

      Cheers man! 🙏🏻

  41. 1

    Thanks, the template I used might look familiar to you :)

    1. 1

      HEY! That's awesome man, first one I see using it 🥳

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        Thank you!

  42. 1

    I'l take all the help I can get :)

    1. 1

      Dang, I'm gonna try your product out later this week. Super smart!

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  43. 1

    Love to hear any ideas!

    1. 1

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      1. 1

        Hey Danny, thanks for the ideas! Good luck with your project, looks great!

  44. 1

    Desperately need better copy for -->

    1. 1

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  45. 1

    Would love to hear your feedback for my podcast host,

    Also, congratulations on reaching product of the day on Product Hunt!

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      Thanks! Still cannot believe it 🤯 Your product works soooo well with Headlime. Had a blast.

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      1. 1

        These are great Danny! Thank you very much.

  46. 1

    Hi, and thanks!

    We're Berlocks -- Accountability for Founders

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      Could you provide a little bit more information or a link to your product? 😌

      1. 1

        Oh sorry, didn't share it.

        We help founders stay accountable to hack together a quick MVP, find customers, and charge revenue.

        Thanks again, and looking forward to it.

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    Congrats on the launch! Definitely checking it out and thinking about that lifetime access.


    *edit: bought the lifetime access and love the headlines.

    1. 1

      Thank you so much Leon! 🥳 Really digging your headline already, as it's super clear. But, here are a few other options :)

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      1. 1

        Appreciate the feedback and the suggestions.

        Again, congrats on the launch! Love the product so far.

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    Hi Danny! Much appreciated. Here is the link: 🙏

    Good luck with your Producthunt launch!!

    1. 1

      Thank you, going super well 🤯. Your headlines:

      Passionate About Buying And Selling Websites? We Are Too

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      1. 1

        Amazing, Danny. Thank you!

  49. 1

    Thank you! Give it some lime ==>

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    2. 1

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      1. 2

        Solid :). Thanks.

    3. 1

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        Yeah! :). Thank you sir.

        1. 1

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            Bullseye. Thanks :)

  50. 1

    Awesome project Danny, good luck with the launch. Would love to see your suggestion for

    1. 2

      Thanks man, going better than expected 🥳

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        Wow they are really good. Love them. My favorites:

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        1. 1

          Happy to help out! Let me know once you got a new template you want to feature on Landingfolio, I'll post it immediately 🙏🏻

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            Thank you very much. I will

  51. 1

    Godspeed Danny!

    "Fly business class for an economy price"

    Not really happy with my headline at the moment.

    1. 1

      Fly Business, Pay Economy.

    2. 1

      Honestly, I love your headline already. But, a few other options:

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      1. 1

        Thanks Danny and goodluck with Headlime!

        1. 1

          Thank you, Skip! Happy to help out 🙏🏻

    1. 1

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    1. 2

      I love that header interaction man, super cool! Your headlines:

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  52. 1

    I've been following Headline during development and I gave it a go this morning for Soosee, an AR ingredient scanner. The tool works great and is super easy. I think my app doesn't really fit the within the standard headline constraints but would love some feedback on how to improve the headline!

    1. 2

      Thank you, Jordi! Here are your headlines 🍋

      Goodbye Manual Checking Labels. Hello Ingredient Scanner
      Foodies: It's Time to Stop Manual Checking Labels. Use Ingredient Scanner
      Tired of Manual Checking Labels? Get started with Soosee!
      The Best Way for Foodies to Easily Check Allergens and Ingredients
      Easily Check Allergens and Ingredients in Seconds
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      1. 1


    2. 1

      I took a look and at first I thought "Soosee - AR Ingredient Scanner" was a great headline. Then I realize it works great only if you are a techie.

      Here is a try:
      Scan Ingredient In A Snap

      1. 1

        Thanks! I'm going to go through the site tonight and wil try some new ones! Appreciate you also going through it 🙂

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